Tag: verse novel

Writing in a form where – for me – every word on the page has to matter and contribute to something that’s incredibly personal is always a challenge. Taking the smaller moments of my experience with sexual assault and being able to magnify them so that each poem – each piece of the puzzle – comes together to give the reader an insight into some of the difficult issues faced by those affected was crucial. Free verse allows me to play with language, typography and placement on the page to create something that’s not only impactful but will hopefully stay with the reader long after they’ve finished it. 

I think there’s a common misconception about verse novels that because the word count is significantly less than that of a prose novel, that it is somehow easier to write and takes less time. This isn’t the case and, in fact, I’ve found I write prose novels more quickly than I write verse novels. While there are so many fantastic benefits of verse form, it is not without its challenges.

I need to know the story I’m trying to tell and how much of it is inspired by my own experiences so that I’m not muddying the waters of what I’m trying to get readers to take away from the story. My new book – Trigger – is inspired by my own personal experiences of sexual assault but they differ greatly to those of my protagonist, Jay. It’s important to recognise the boundary between inspiration and fiction. I need to channel Jay’s narrative voice while ensuring that my own experiences don’t override my character’s.

Every word on the page matters so completing the novel is the first step in a chain of several. It’s ensuring every individual poem is doing what it needs to and that every word on the page is necessary. It’s understanding what’s working well and re-writing certain sections to strengthen the story so it can have maximum impact. It’s giving the reader smaller moments to breathe between some of the more dramatic scenes. It’s a balancing act and I’m not sure Trigger would have been the book it is today without the guidance of my dear friend, Jake Hope, or indeed the wonderful team at Little Island Books.

For anyone that wants to write in verse, I’d say to enjoy the process, kick the editorial devil on your shoulder to the side and let the words fly. First drafts will never be perfect but take joy in the creative process or you’ll find the challenges that much greater. It can take a while to find your narrative voice in verse but don’t let the challenge outweigh the creative freedom that the form has and most of all, trust and enjoy the process.

See below an extract of the opening of Trigger:

HOLLOW
I don’t remember
Anything from that night.

I don’t remember
How I got
The bruises down my thighs.

I don’t remember
How I woke up there,
Wet grass splayed around me.

I don’t remember
When they scooped out
All of me
From this hollow husk
Of a body.

THE PARK
Head heavy,
Lifeless limbs,
Muddled mind –
Every sound
Slices through my being,
A waterfall of sensations
Drowning me.

I feel for my phone,
Fingertips grazing the cracks.
Hold down the power button.

Nothing.

A golf ball
Whizzes overhead.
I get to my feet,
Stumble into tree cover,
Face drenched in sweat,
Dried blood and
Fresh tears.

C.G. Moore

C. G. (or Chris) Moore is the published author of three books. His second book – Gut Feelings – explored his own experiences living with chronic illness and was nominated for the Yoto Carnegie Medal and won the KPMG Children’s Books Ireland Book of the Year Award 2022. His new book – Trigger – is inspired by his own experiences of sexual assault and looks at consent. 

Chris has also contributed a poem to Our Rights – an anthology endorsed by Amnesty International. He also works as a Campaign Officer for The Reading Agency where he leads on digital events and supports libraries and schools across the UK.