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Guest Blog Post: Emily-Jane Clark on Writing Comedy, author of The Beasts of Knobbly Bottom series

“Can you write a joke about this building that looks like Donald Trump?” This was just one of random things I worked on when I was a TV comedy writer!

Before I was a children’s author, I wrote for television shows such as The Mash Report, Mock the Week and The Jonathan Ross Show, where I learnt a lot about joke-writing and how to use comedy to engage an audience, both of which were really useful when I started working on my funny series for children – The Beasts of Knobbly Bottom!

Writing jokes about feminism, politics, pop culture and parenting, may be very different to the humour in my The Beasts of Knobbly Bottom books but actually the process I use to come up with funny ideas is the same!

One of my favourite ways to come up with a comical situation is by using my ‘Wouldn’t it be funny if?’ technique. I will take an ordinary everyday occurrence or current issue and think of a way to make it silly, fun, or sometimes absurd! For instance, what if … toilets came alive and were really cross that people were weeing on them! Or, what if the King accidentally did a massive burp during his Christmas Day speech or even, as I put in my first book, wouldn’t it be funny if sheep turned into mean gangster vampires?

While it was a lot of fun creating comedy for grown ups, I find you can be even more bonkers when writing for children, which is one of the reasons I wanted to write a kid’s novel. That, and the fact I love a good bum joke, which tend to go down much better with under elevens…

Another form of humour I love to write is observational comedy – I did a lot of this for The Mash Report and the Daily Mash, so I really wanted to incorporate it into my books! As a mum of two young daughters, I realised that some of our discussions (OK, arguments!) are pretty funny. Children often try to find a loophole in their parents’ rules, think very literally or just be plain cheeky, and this can be hilarious. Therefore, I tried to include this in the relationship between my Knobbly Bottom mum character, Lucy, and her two daughters, Maggie, and Lily. It was important to me that their interactions were realistic and relatable and make parents laugh along with their children.

I love writing comedy for adults, but as a mother on a permanent quest to make her children laugh, and a massive kid at heart, creating Knobbly Bottom and all its weird and wonderful characters really has been a dream come true.

Emily-Jane Clark is a TV comedy writer, author and part-time drama teacher whose passion for stories and making children laugh inspired her to turn her hand to funny children’s fiction. She has written two books for children aged 8 – 11  THE BEASTS OF KNOBBLY BOTTOM: ATTACK OF THE VAMPIRE SHEEP and THE BEASTS OF KNOBBLY BOTTOM: RISE OF THE ZOMBIE PIGS (out on the 4th January).

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Interview: Author and WriteMentor creator Stuart White on new middle grade book ‘Astra FireStar and the Ripples of Time’

I’m a secondary school biology teacher who escapes from a busy job and family life by escaping into my small office and writing about fantastical worlds and characters! I’ve been writing seriously for about 13 years or so, and have now published 3 books under my own imprint, Penobi Press. I have two kids, E and X, who are 8 and 3, and quite honestly, way too much for me to handle!

Yes! It’s perfect for fans of Dr Who and I pitch it like this:

When new girl and time-fugitive Astra crashes a space-octopus into twelve-year-old Sam’s school, he swaps his unhappy home life for a timeless adventure to the stars. On the run from the time-police, they travel to far-off planets, in space and time, meeting new and unexpected friends, as well as many enemies, and growing a closer friendship than Sam could possibly ever have imagined. But when given a chance to resurrect his dead brother in exchange for Astra’s freedom, he must decide – change his past or forge a new future.  

But at its heart, it’s about loss and grief, and accepting the past and learning to move forward with your life.  

The key to me doing all this is simple: I am not very good at any of it! Seriously, I’m lucky to enjoy and be reasonably competent at a number of things, which I also love, so that Venn diagram intersects nicely across teaching/writing/community building, so I use many of the same skills across each, which make it easier to manage.

In all honesty, I might not still be writing if I hadn’t met lots of like-minded writers back in the early 2010s on Twitter, and so much of what I do is to help others see there’s hope and a wide community of writers there, all in it together, trying to achieve the same goal, and there’s a lot of strength and joy that comes from being a small part of that.

Honestly, I could write a book on this (maybe one day I will!) but the secret is keeping it simple. There’s SO MUCH information out there and so many ways to do it, that it’s best to try, initially, to drown out the noise and do the basics well.

Get a great editor and cover illustrator/designer, talk lots about it (remember you’re just as deserving, if not more so, of shouting about your book than someone who is traditionally published – after all, you’re doing about 3 or 4 times the work they are, so don’t be shy!), and focus on connecting with readers and the gatekeepers to those readers (i.e. school teachers, librarians, parents, grandparents, etc.) to get your books noticed by them. Everything else, and there’s a LOT of everything else, can be worked on later. 

I hope readers have fun and enjoy the adventure. Escapism is something that saved me from the harsh realities of my life when I was younger, and I hope this book can provide that for young people who are finding life hard or don’t have the perfect home situation. I don’t like to bang readers over the head with the theme, but there’s also an important lesson on letting go of your past and forging a new, exciting future for yourself. So many children from underprivileged backgrounds don’t think they can change their stars, and they have to follow the path of those around them and before them. I want Sam and Astra to show them they can do, and go, wherever they want.

We’ve just announced a partnership with Bonnier Books UK for our awards, and they’re keen to be involved in other things we do, too. They share a similar vision that we do, in that we want to provide opportunities for new voices to share their stories and give children a chance to read those great new voices. But we really do have a lot of pots in the fire, gently warming, and we’ll be continuing to put writers first, and organise things which will best help them to achieve their publishing goals, whatever they are. 

For me personally, I’ve got a Kickstarter coming next year for the next 3 Eva Knight books in the series, with Jen Jamieson, my brilliant cover illustrator, already agreeing to draw those. I’m also working on the sequel to The Nameless, my YA debut, and have an MG diabetic superhero story and YA serial killer thriller set on the moon that I think I will submit to agents in 2024. I’ve also outlined a Scottish Mythology MG which I want to write, but I might not get to that until 2025 (or maybe it will be a secret project that I can work on late at night when no-one is looking!). 

Great question! I always dreamed of being an explorer as a kid, but so much of Earth was already explored and discovered. So I’d maybe go back 200 years or so and set on a mission to one of the poles, or to climb one of the big mountains. Or go the other way, and fast forward into the future and be an astronaut who explores new worlds both within and outwith our Solar System. That would be fun! 

Stuart is an award-winning author and secondary school teacher. He has a Masters Degree in Creative Writing and founded, and now runs, WriteMentor. In 2020 and 2022 he was placed on the SCWBI Undiscovered Voices longlist and named as an Hononary Mention for his novels Ghosts of Mars and Astra FireStar and the Ripples of Time.
In 2023, he won the WriteBlend award for his middle grade debut, Ghosts of Mars. Stuart was included in The Bookseller’s 2021 list of Rising Stars in the publishing industry. He can be found at @StuartWhiteWM on most social media platforms.
Like his career, Steve’s writing is filled with tech and engineering, although his speculative thrillers tend to have higher stakes and fewer meetings. Before he found himself advising companies on digital transformation, Steve was a copywriter, a magazine editor, a communications director, a product designer and a webcaster, though not at the same time. Home is South London, where he lives with his wife and teenage daughters. They wish he’d stop saying, ‘What if…’

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Interview: Maya MacGregor on YA book ‘The Evolving Truth of Ever-Stronger Will’.

This book was a lot like The Many Half-Lived Lives of Sam Sylvester, in that it was a way for me to tell a story like a roadmap for my younger self. There’s a lot of found family, a lot of self-discovery, and some spooky happenings that tie the narrative together.

The Evolving Truth of Ever-Stronger Will is a love letter to every kid who has been made to feel monstrous. While that takes place through a lens of a kid who’s neurodivergent and agender, I hope Will’s journey will resonate with teens who may not share those traits too. It took me a long time to learn the lessons Will learns—that an abuser’s projected image of them is not their truth—and I hope that Will’s perseverance, tenacity, and self-preservation will help model a way forwards for anyone in a similar boat.

It was the only way I could get across a very specific message that acts as a framing device for the story on several levels. I wasn’t sure I could get away with it, but it felt true to the story I wanted to tell. That feels a bit insufferable to write out, ha. But ultimately, I choose points of view to reflect emotional proximity to the characters. Which isn’t to say that third person can’t be emotionally resonant—it absolutely can—but first and second person each invite the reader much closer in a way that feels more intimate to me. Others may disagree, of course!

One of the things I’ve mentioned at a few in-person events is that a certain plot point that happens right at the end of, I think, chapter three or four had an absolutely eerie reflection in my own personal life. I paused writing just after that, a paragraph or so into the next chapter (which was smack in the heart of the emotion still) and put the book aside for a filmmaking project and a choir trip to Austria, and in the time I was away, I discovered via Ancestry.com DNA that my biological father was someone entirely different to who I thought he was. If you read the book to that point, you can probably understand how when I went back and read into my progress to get my bearings, I had to go take a few minutes to collect myself.

Will is very much like me on many levels—agender, an undiagnosed autistic teen (I was a teen once!), the product of a lot of upheaval and poverty—and the emotion of having written a different (but just as emotionally impactful) revelation bare months before I experienced my own welded this book to my heart in a way I don’t think anything else could have. My estranged biological mother is not Francis and was not physically abusive like that, but she did keep some whoppers from me, and over the past few years, like Will, I’ve been sorting through all that. I’ve also been privileged to meet and form a very loving relationship with my biological dad, and we’ve been making up for thirty-four years of lost time.

Without a doubt, Will, Raz, and Julian. I love Matt and Hannah as well, of course, but gosh, I adore Julian and Raz so much. We all need people who see us for who we are without us having to offer a university-level course in how to relate to us, and it was very important for me to model that with those characters. I also want Raz and Junius Sylvester to be best pals!

Absolutely. As a wee anecdote, we’d actually trunked both of my YA books because they bounced off editorial boards for the use of they/them pronouns (and non-stereotypical autistic phenotypes, to boot) in 2017-2018 when I wrote the books. My first ever agent, Jes Negrón, had since gone into editing at BMK (now Astra Books for Young Readers), and when she started acquiring YA, she came straight to me and my new agent Sara Megibow, knowing I’d a trunked manuscript. If she hadn’t been so keen to work with me again, I don’t know that these books would exist.

I cannot count the number of messages I’ve received from readers saying that they have never seen themselves represented in fiction before now. That’s heartbreaking in a lot of ways, but in others, it’s such a relief for me to hear. I had to write the books for them to exist, as did so many of my contemporaries who are doing just that these days. Now there are many more chances for this moment to happen at younger ages! Things are changing for the better, albeit slowly and not without a lot of pushback.

Alas, I don’t think I’m allowed to say much, but I will say there’s a Gaelic-heavy YA fantasy in the works, set in my beloved Argyll in the Gàidhealtachd. It’s a story about belonging, magic, the sìthichean, and intergenerational language transmission. Gaelic music and culture informs my entire life; I use the language every day, and our cultural practices are the foundation of my entire sense of home. I hope to bring some of that to the wider world from the perspective of someone who lives and breathes within that sphere.

Plus, the book also has an agender autistic protagonist—and a genderfluid shapeshifting sidhe prince for a love interest, so what’s not to love? 😉

The book is done, and I truly hope to have news about a publisher and publication timeline soon! I’m absolutely itching for folk to meet Cam and Ezra.

Maya MacGregor is an author, singer, and artist based in Glasgow, Scotland. A fluent Gaelic speaker, Maya is active in many community activities in Gaelic music as well as writing contemporary YA and adult fiction (as Emmie Mears and M Evan MacGriogair). Maya has a degree in history and is passionate about writing the stories for teens they wish had existed when they were younger and fills them with the type of people who have always populated their world.
Their pronouns are they/them.
The Many Half-Lived Lives of Sam Sylvester was Maya’s first YA novel and was a finalist for the Andre Norton Nebula award and the Walden Award. The Evolving Truth of Ever-Stronger Will, Maya’s second YA, came out Halloween 2023.

Caitlyn is a young reader from Cornwall who is a proud member of the LGBTQIA+ community. They enjoy reading stories about young people like them, as well as fantasy novels. They surround themselves with media that includes the LGBTQIA+ community, so this book fit right in with their bookshelf.

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Interview: Jennifer Burkinshaw on her new YA book ‘Happiness Seeker’.

Happiness Seeker tells the story of just one week’s sixth form field trip to the beautiful but lethal Morecambe Bay. On her very first afternoon, Allie meets a mysterious lad on the shore which changes the lives of everyone involved. One reviewer has described Happiness Seeker as a ‘thriller-mystery-love story’ which does sum it up its genres neatly; I’d add in ‘tragedy’, as the prologue tells you someone is lost in the vast, dark seas of Morecambe Bay.

Places seem to be what spark a story in me, both in my debut Igloo and Happiness Seeker. Visiting my parents in Grange-over-Sands on Morecambe Bay so often; learning about the history of the Bay and seeing people, every day, still walking out onto the treacherous sands despite all the warning signs. Before my parents even moved there, though, I once took a Drama group to a hostel near Grange to rehearse, which is pretty close to the set up in the novel; however, none of my group broke every rule in the book and we all went home safely.

At the heart of the story is what could be described as a political issue which particularly concerns me, so I recruited the advice of the charity Unseen during my writing process.

Map and plan of the novel’s setting by Douglas McCleery, architecture student

I first started to feel an irresistible pull to write about twenty years ago and knew I had to start to learn the craft, an endless journey, of course. Since I still feel seventeen in my head, writing for young adults was a natural move to me; I love the intensity of feeling you need to create in YA fiction; the need to be immediate and and pacy, as well as reflective; I love how so much of YA fiction deals with first and life-changing experiences for its characters. So, I did an MA in Creative Writing for Children at Manchester Met; after that I joined the Golden Egg Academy and was mentored by Imogen Cooper. I count myself as extremely fortunate that then Debbie McGowan, my genuinely brilliant editor and publisher at Beaten Track, offered to publish my debut, Igloo, and now Happiness Seeker.

As a former Drama teacher, I couldn’t resist creating a group who, having to script a piece for their A Level, choose to write it about Morecambe Bay and the many who have drowned there over the centuries. These past tragedies soon bleed into the present of the story. I also include some reference to Arthur Miller’s A View from the Bridge which Allie is reading that fateful week; Miller is my favourite playwright but, also, the action of his tragedy has some echoes in the story happening ‘now’ in Happiness Seeker.

Map and plan of the novel’s setting by Douglas McCleery, architecture student

What was really tricky was to work out what Mareno would reveal to Allie and when – especially since he has such compelling reasons not to tell her his whole truth. I spent ages thinking what he would least mind Allie knowing and what he’d try to keep from her at all costs. I hope he intrigues the reader; I tried so hard to see him through Allie’s eyes – what draws her to him even as she finds him such a ‘dark horse’.

Allie has a painful rivalry with Courtney, a girl in her drama group who has bullied her since Allie joined the school late in Year 9. To some extent, I am like Allie – quieter, on the fringe of groups and I do remember girls at my single-sex school who could be cutting like Courtney. Allie’s best friend is Finn but unfortunately, he falls for Courtney which causes Allie a lot of heartache. I haven’t experienced having a boy as a best friend but I relished creating their deep friendship which is at the heart of the story just as much as Allie’s new relationships in Grange.

I need to get back to ‘Going West’, a story told from the POV of a member of each of three generations in a family who move from Essex back to the mum’s childhood home in Wales. I’m toying whether to tell some of it in verse …

Jennifer’s debut book is Igloo, a winter coming-of-age story of first love set in the French Alps and Lancashire, where she grew up. Happiness Seeker is her second book.
Now, she’s a bit of a nomad – loves spending time by the sea as much as in the mountains and with her growing family.
You can visit her website here.

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Interview: Author Jennifer Claessen chats about her new book ‘The November Witches’.

The November Witches picks up Clemmie’s story immediately after all of the things she did – and feels bad about! – in October. She’s expecting a magic-free month and all of the witches are mostly miserable about it but, of course, magical mayhem is about to ensue. It’s up to Clemmie to learn to speak up for herself and the young hags though, as it’s only together that they can fight back against the fires and knights plaguing them.

Thank you so much! And yes, I was already thinking about Bonfire Night and marshmallows and a strange knight knocking on the door even as I wrote The October Witches! November doesn’t always get the festive love that October and December get but it’s an amazing month for forest walks. I moved house just before writing this book and now live on the edge of an incredible, ever-changing forest which definitely inspired the story.

My family is costume-obsessed so we usually dress up at least three times for Halloween, always cute, never creepy! This year one of our fancy dress outfits was the ‘soot sprites’ from My Neighbour Totoro which was pure chaos and so fun. Toasting marshmallows outdoors is a must of course. Like the Merlyns, I have mixed feelings about fireworks but I love a bonfire. Oh, and Pie Night, like Aunt Connie creates, is essential too! Autumn clothes are the best too – the season begins for me when I put on a scarf and a big pair of boots, or for Clemmie and her coven, a binbag.

In The October Witches, Clemmie wrestles with coming into her power but now, in a magicless November, she’s struggling with using her voice. I write generally knowing the ending as I love a big, busy, bustly finale where the covens get together and finally sort out their problems! I think this is officially a spoiler but, just between us, there’s a dragon in The November Witches, too hot to even touch, and she was a surprise!

I love everything magical! I’m currently reading The Thief of Farrowfell Hall by Ravena Guron which has a really cool magical system as the magic is edible. I love the world which is believable and compelling and the magic itself, though it often sounds disgusting to eat!

I’m always super happy digging deep into some magical research! For the whole ‘A Month of Magic’ trilogy I did lots of reading about the old, wise, male Merlin (versus my young, self-conscious and female Merlyns!) and what happened to him. I’d never even heard of ‘Avalon’ where some Arthurian scholars believe the Once and Future King will still rise again from but became pretty fascinated by it. For The November Witches I went to the Fitzwilliam Museum in Cambridge to be completely surrounded by armour and imagine what it was like to be a knight – mostly pretty uncomfortable it turns out!

Well, now we’re this deep into autumn, we have to finish the trilogy! The December Witches comes out in 2024 and I’ve just had a sneak peek of early cover designs and it is looking gorgeously sparkly and snowy! Writing-wise, I’m working on new myth-inspired tales, this time set in Ancient Greece – and in a summer holiday!

Photo by Jack Barnes

Jennifer was born in Reading and grew up a book worm. She studied literature and theatre at the University of Sheffield, the Chinese University of Hong Kong, Canterbury Christchurch University and Central School of Speech and Drama. A teacher and theatre-maker, Jennifer loves stories, especially for children, whether on stage or page. Jennifer currently works in the West End, taking children to the theatre and lives in the East End with her partner, a Dutch toymaker, and their baby daughter. She loves reading, travel and ice cream. You can find her on her yellow bike or in a red velvet seat in the stalls, applauding.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Interview: Rebecca Barrow on YA Thriller ‘And Don’t Look Back’

Thanks for having me! And Don’t Look Back is a twisty thriller that centres on Harlow, a girl who has spent her entire life on the run. When her mother is killed in a car accident, Harlow is left to unravel the secrets of her life and her family all alone.. 

I really love writing about mothers and daughters, and I thought it would be interesting to explore generational trauma—how a girl like Harlow is shaped by her mother’s experiences, and how she deals with that while at the same time struggling to figure out who she is in the same way all teenagers do. I really enjoy writing older YA because that time in life is so interesting—you’re on the precipice on adulthood but still a kid, at the same time. And like Harlow, a lot of teenagers are dealing with really heavy things like the loss of a parent or mental health struggles or a million other things, and I think it’s important to acknowledge those things.

It took a while to come together but once the planning was done, the writing came quite easily. I usually don’t like to plan too much because I like discovering things through the writing, but often writing a mystery means you need to plan, so it’s about finding the right balance for me. Some of the plot aspects had been in my head for years just waiting for the right story so it really was a mix of long term planning and figuring some things out as I went!

Yes, I actually really do! I don’t think I will ever run out of ideas, but I do find they sometimes take a while to come to me. I’m definitely not one of those authors who have so many ideas that the main struggle is choosing which one to work on, but I think needing to let things develop in the back of my mind can also be really beneficial. I don’t see myself ever not writing. 

I write in twenty-minute blocks and use a program called Freedom to block the internet while I write, otherwise I would never get anything done. I usually have a word count goal so I just keep writing in those twenty minute slices with breaks in between until I have the words! I like to use different playlists for different books, to help me get in the right headspace, and that’s about it! 

I have mostly always wanted to be a writer but I did entertain the idea of several other careers—nurse, fashion designer, and choreographer were the big three! But it was mostly always writer for me.

Rebecca Barrow is the critically acclaimed author of And Don’t Look Back, Bad Things Happen Here, and several others.
She is a lover of sunshine, Old Hollywood icons, and all things high femme. She lives and writes in England.

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Interview: YA author Shelby Mahurin chats about ‘The Scarlet Veil’

Of course! The Scarlet Veil is the first in a new duology set in the same universe as Serpent & Dove. It follows Célie Tremblay, the first woman initiated into the brotherhood of Chasseurs, as she investigates a string of murders in Cesarine—all the victims of magical origin, all their bodies drained of blood. Her investigation leads her straight to the heart of a vampire lair, where she captures the attention of its cruel yet beautiful king. He has plans of his own for Célie, who refuses to acknowledge the whispers from her past that still haunt her.

Interestingly enough, no—I didn’t plan to tell Célie’s story at all. In the thick of deadline with Gods & Monsters, I even swore I’d never return to the world of Serpent & Dove again. I wanted to tell new stories with new characters; I’d even sold another duology about Greek sirens! With a little time and distance, however, I realized I wasn’t quite ready to let the world go. When I called my critique partner on the way home from my local indie the day before Gods & Monsters published, crying, she told me it didn’t necessarily need to be over—and then she asked about Célie. We both agreed her story hadn’t reached its conclusion, and I’d always wanted to write a vampire book. Their inclusion felt like a natural extension to this world. Within ten minutes, we’d plotted out a rough outline of The Scarlet Veil, and the rest is history.

Yes! I always knew The Scarlet Veil would end the way it did, and I knew I didn’t want to write another trilogy so soon after Serpent & Dove. Thus, a duology was the perfect fit!

It seems like the trickiest part for me to write is always the part I’m currently writing. Ha! In all seriousness, though, Célie is an extremely emotional and vulnerable character—a complete foil to Lou and Reid, who both avoid their emotions at all costs. I personally err more on their side of emotional avoidance, so it took a lot for me to sit with Célie and her feelings. Other scenes that are always difficult to write are action sequences; I know literally nothing about self-defence, so whenever Célie or Michal needed to physically fight someone, it meant a lot of time on the internet looking up choreography and trying to describe such technical movements in a natural way.

The easiest scenes for me to write involve romance—banter, sexual tension, a lingering look. Those are always my favorite.

I’ve always loved vampires—Twilight, The Vampire Diaries, Underworld, and True Blood were pillars of my adolescence. There’s something inherently seductive about a vampire, especially after Bram Stoker brought a refined façade to their savagery with Dracula. Maybe it’s because vampires are so powerful with their predatory speed and strength, or maybe it’s because they’re immortal. They never grow old. They live forever young, forever attractive, yet they’ve seen things we haven’t. They know things we don’t. It’s the ultimate fantasy, isn’t it? For such an all-powerful creature to fall in love with a human? And then there’s the whole business of their drinking our blood—it makes everything all the more dangerous, and don’t we all crave a little danger? I know Célie does.

It’s so interesting that you mention worldbuilding specifically because—to be completely transparent—I’ve never loved worldbuilding. Or at least, I’ve always loved it less than character work and romance. In fact, I would argue that most of the worldbuilding in The Scarlet Veil came along as a means to cram every single trope I love into this story. The vampires’ casket company, for example, was an answer to the question, “How can I realistically get Michal and Célie into one casket together?” It needed to make sense. It needed to feel like a natural progression of both the plot and world. And so, I started brainstorming, and one thing led to another, and of course vampires have always needed a way to sneak into Cesarine, right? Lou and Reid would’ve known about them in the original trilogy otherwise. And Célie needed to face her fear of caskets after what happened with Filippa in Blood & Honey. And thus, Requiem, Ltd. was born. I could think of a dozen more examples of this sort of jigsaw puzzle worldbuilding, but you get the idea.

My advice to aspiring authors would be to lean into what you love—find a way to use it, to leverage it throughout your story, and the pieces will fall into place.

Good romance requires tension. Lots of tension. For me, that means I need both an internal and external reason to keep the lovers apart. Otherwise, why wouldn’t they get together as soon as they feel that first spark of attraction? Again, those reasons also need to make logical sense; nothing infuriates me more as a reader than a flimsy excuse for two people who want to be together not being together. The reasons also need to involve personal stakes—what will happen if they do get together? It needs to have a real consequence.

I’m still drafting The Scarlet Veil’s sequel now, but afterward, I’ll be returning my attention to the Greek siren duology I mentioned earlier. I actually sold those books back in 2020 and 2021, so I’m extremely eager to get back to them!

Shelby Mahurin is theNew York Times bestselling author of the Serpent & Dove trilogy. She grew up on a small farm in rural Indiana, where sticks became wants and cows became dragons. Her rampant imagination didn’t fade with age, so she continues to play make-believe every day—with words now instead of cows. When not writing, Shelby watches The Office and reads voraciously. She still lives near that childhood farm with her very tall husband and semi feral children.

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Interview: Michael Thomas Ford chats about his new novel ‘Every Star That Falls’

Every Star That Falls begins the day after Suicide Notes ends. Jeff returns home and goes back to his old life, but he’s no longer the old Jeff. He has to figure out what that means in terms of his relationships with his family, his friends, and his larger community. He also wants to explore what it means being an out member of the LGBTQ community, which involves finding a support group. The people he meets there change his life even more, in ways he could never have imagined a couple of months ago. 

It’s definitely surprising to me how Suicide Notes continues to find new readers. It’s also a testament to the power of social media, which wasn’t really a thing when the book first came out. Now, readers are sharing their experiences of the book on places like TikTok and Instagram, and that’s allowing it to connect with even more readers. One of the things I love most about the world right now is that the voices of readers are so strong and so powerful. They’re not waiting for anyone to tell them what to read and what they should like, they’re deciding for themselves and then spreading the word. It’s fantastic to watch this happen.

The most powerful tool for creating change is empathy. When we learn to really listen to people – particularly to people with whom we might not think we have anything in common – and hear about their experiences and what they feel, we learn to see the world in a different way. That’s how change happens. When we create barriers between us, we only see things from one perspective and it’s easier for other points of view to feel threatening. There’s much more that connects us than divides us, and learning to focus on those things while allowing for differing perspectives is what creates forward movement.

Jeff is essentially me, and I have always approached difficult situations by looking for the humour in them. I think that if you can find a way to laugh, even in the darkest moments, it creates a spark of light that grows brighter and shows you the way through. I realize not everyone appreciates this approach, because we’re all different, but for me the most effective way to deal with life when it gets hard or seems hopeless is to find the moments of joy that remind me that the darker times don’t last forever. 

In general, I don’t enjoy sequels because no matter what happens, someone is disappointed. Once someone falls in love with a character, they developed expectations of what they want for them. With Suicide Notes I wanted readers to imagine what happens to Jeff when he leaves the hospital he’s in for the whole book. But as time went on, I thought of more things I wanted to say about certain topics, and continuing Jeff’s story was the best way to do that. Also, there were some characters and events from Suicide Notes that I found readers asking about over and over again, and writing a sequel gave me the opportunity to answer those questions. 

I write for a number of different audiences, including adults and younger readers, so there’s always something happening. I’m currently finishing up a ghost-themed novel for middle grade readers, which is a lot of creepy fun. That will be out next year. And there just might be another part to the story about Jeff and his new friends coming. Readers can always find the latest news on my website: www.michaelthomasford.com.

Michael Thomas Ford is the author of numerous works for both adults and young readers, including Suicide Notes as well as some of the earliest books about the HIV/AIDS crisis and several books about the LGBTQ community. A five-time winner of the Lambda Literary Award, he has also been a finalist for the Shirley Jackson Award, the Bram Stoker Award, the Firecracker Alternative Book Award, and the Ignyte Award. He lives in rural Appalachia with his husband and dogs.

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Interview: Children’s Author Fiona Spence-Arnold on debut book ‘Rhamni Finds Her Wings’

It’s an illustrated chapter book for 8 -10s about a butterfly and moth’s adventure in The National Forest.  

When Rhamni, a Brimstone butterfly pupates on Midsummer’s Eve, she finds herself alone, no brothers or sisters to be found. Thinking they’ve gone in search of the elusive Ghost Orchid, she teams up with new-found friend, Max, a timid Mint moth and the pair set off on a perilous adventure following messages on bramble leaves through the forest. 

When I found out Honey Craft, an independent publishers based in Leicester, were seeking a children’s writer with a connection to The National Forest, I jumped at the opportunity. Living nearby, and with a love of forests and nature, I applied and was excited to win the commission to write a short book for children as part of their MiniBEAST series.

I didn’t know that much about butterflies or moths before starting, but I certainly know more now! The research was fascinating. The characteristics of the insects and their habitats inspired the story and the characters themselves. I was fortunate to be guided by Entomologist, Graham Smith, who was also working on the project. He told us about a group of butterflies who used to be known as the Aristocratic butterflies. These include the Red Admiral and Purple Emperor. It inspired me to imagine a hierarchy in the forest led by the antagonist, Emperor Ethelbert, a Purple emperor butterfly who tries to wield power over all the butterflies and moths.

Graham also told us about the tiny Golden Pygmy moth whose caterpillars eat ‘patterns’ in bramble leaves before they pupate into moths. It inspired me to wonder, what if these caterpillars were trying to send messages through the forest on the leaves? Could they undermine the aristocratic butterflies? What could their messages lead to? It needed to be something scarce and precious. When I read about the rare Ghost Orchid flower, it seemed a perfect fit. Coupled with Rhamni’s worry about her family of Brimstone butterflies, my main character’s quest was set.

Reading a book like mine, where the characters are all minibeasts having an adventure can be a great way to encourage empathy for species other than our own, so seek out books that encourage children to think of insects and animals as integral to the eco-system and important characters in their own right. They’re more likely to want to protect them. Research has also found that when we engage with nature in a positive way, we boost our sense of wellbeing and happiness. 

Of course, you don’t have to live in the countryside to engage children with nature, especially minibeasts, they’re found everywhere! Keep an eye out under rocks, between paving stones and in quiet places in your house.  

In the summer months you’re more likely to see butterflies and moths. You can attract them by growing brightly coloured flowers in gardens or containers. Purple flowers will attract them the most as they see different colour temperatures than we do, including UV, and the colour purple stands out the best for them. Once you’ve found your bugs, you can use books or the internet to identify them. That’s where you start finding out about their characteristics and where the creative ideas can start to take root. Have fun thinking up different situations for them and make them your main characters, that way you really get to see life from their point of view. 

In my book, Rhamni and Max follow the messages on bramble leaves. These patterns on leaves are easily spotted during Autumn and winter and would make a great treasure hunt activity with children. 

We held the book launch at the Timber Festival in July and we also ran guided butterfly and moth walks, and craft activities for children. The Timber Festival is a great way of engaging children with nature as it’s held in the heart of the National Forest and has brilliant sessions and activities on different aspects of nature aimed at both children and adults. 

It was exciting working with Keith Turner, the wonderful illustrator of Rhamni Finds Her Wings, seeing how he interacted with and interpreted my story and characters. We had several meetings to share ideas, and to ask questions of the Entomologist, about characteristics and behaviours of butterflies and moths. Once I’d shared the first draft of the story with him, he started to develop his ideas about what the characters looked like.

As I redrafted, Keith asked me to think about a key feature or accessory for each character. Running this by my editor, Jess Green, I thought of big stompy boots for the intrepid explorer, Rhamni the Brimstone butterfly and a backpack for sensible Max, the Mint moth. The top hat and monocle for the villain, Emperor Ethelbert, were Keith’s ideas and made me laugh when I saw them in the final illustrations. I didn’t give an accessory to Tig, the Golden Pygmy moth caterpillar, but Keith brilliantly had him painting a ‘Mona Lisa’ with a leaf. Keith uses collage in his illustrations, and he told me if you look closely at the moon in one of the pictures, it’s actually an image of grated cheese!  

I would say tip No. 1 is read children’s books. Lots and lots of them, then some more! I read books for children of all ages, first as a reader, then as a writer, making notes, studying style, characterisation, use of voice, pacing – everything. When I was first writing for children, I would pick a book and use it as a mentor text, to really hone in on what the author was doing, how they were doing it and how I could learn from it. I’d make copious notes in the book and copy sections out to ‘feel’ and hear how it worked.

Tip no. 2  – write! You won’t get a book written if you don’t sit down and write. I often say to myself, I’ll just make twenty minutes to write, and when I’ve sat down to do that, I invariably write for longer. It’s amazing how quickly a story will emerge.

Tip No. 3 – have fun. Experiment – this is particularly good if you’re stuck with an idea. Try out new forms, styles, tenses, voice. Plus, if you’re enjoying writing your reader is more likely to enjoy reading it and when you experiment your ideas will flow.

Lastly, find your writing buddies and hold them close. They get it, they’ll be your readers, your champions, your support and you will be theirs. The more you read each other’s work and give constructive criticism, the more you learn about the craft and what kind of writer you are. 

Fiona Spence-Arnold lives in deepest, darkest Leicestershire with her family and bouncy dog.  She writes funny chapter books and exciting adventures for children. When she’s not writing stories, she works on education projects for an award-winning charity and tutors creative writing. Fiona can often be spotted catching story ideas whilst walking in the woods with her dog. She’s thrilled that her debut book, an exciting adventure in the forest, Rhamni Finds her Wings, is published by Honey Craft and is out now. 

From 14th October, it will be available to buy from independent bookshop Fox Books, Leicester. It will also be available in the gallery at DeMontfort University and through libraries in The National Forest soon.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Interview: Children’s Author Emma Read on ‘The Housetrap’

Of course! The Housetrap is a spooky, Scooby Doo-esque adventure where four almost-friends find themselves trapped in a strange house in the woods. The house is set for an escape room style party but for some reason it doesn’t want to let the kids go … it has other plans for them. The team have to unravel multiple mysteries and at the same time attempt to solve the puzzles and riddles left by the architect of the house, in a desperate effort to escape. The only thing they have in their favour is that they are alone in there …  

Or are they? 

For readers 9+ who like mystery, puzzles, adventure, and the odd jump scare. 

In addition to the creepy words (by me) the illustrations on the cover and interior are by Coralie Muce.

The editing process on The Housetrap was something of a metaphor for the book, in that it was a twisty, turny puzzle that needed unlocking, disassembling, and slotting back into place the right way round! I couldn’t have done any of it without my brilliant agent, Lauren Gardner, and my editor at Chicken House, Kesia Lupo who both helped me make it make sense.  

I’m not a natural plotter, although I usually formulate a rough plan in advance (plot points, pinch points etc); when it comes to writing I love the discovery approach – it’s a bit like wandering through a maze—or a house—that keeps changing and revealing new secrets. No spoilers, but there is one item in the book that the kids need to find, and I only worked out where it was by writing all the way to the end! It’s a fun method that works for me, but it does mean edits are usually hard work!  

Places I’ve been, and seen, always find their way into my books, and The Housetrap is no exception. The idea for the house itself, and the entire story really, came from a beautiful but declining hotel in Rome. Haphazardly built, it had several mezzanine levels, rooms that were unexpectedly connected, and stairs that didn’t seem to go where you thought they should.

As I wrote, I augmented it with fictional houses and hotels (the Overlook won’t be a surprise, I’m sure!) But it was another, real-life, hotel which lent the finishing touches, including all the taxidermy animals and mounted deer heads. This was another, past-its-best building, hidden in the New Forest in Hampshire (a forest created for a king, like Badwell Woods in the novel.) 

The Housetrap is set in Suffolk, where I grew up, which is home to Thetford forest – a magnificently huge place, which, when I was a child, I truly believed a person could get lost in forever. 

Character-wise, I think the only one who is drawn from life is Deliah. There is a lot of me in her – like her I was embarrassed of being smart; I thought it made other people uncomfortable so I masked it … being clever wasn’t cool where I went to school! In Deliah I wanted to create a character who could work through those feelings and grow to be proud of her intelligence. 

In Milton the Mighty/Megastar, I was keen to show the characters as realistically as possible, their spidery movement, physiology and, as much as possible within the bounds of the story, their behaviour. In The Housetrap, there’s not a lot of science directly on the page, but I still examine all my scenes to make sure they are logical, within the rules of whatever supernatural power is in play.

More generally, I find a wealth of story inspiration in science, from pure sci-fi ideas, to cli-fi, to the natural world and way beyond: the first story I ever had published was inspired by a conversation about ghosts on The Infinite Monkey Cage (a science comedy podcast with Professor Brian Cox) which makes it feel like I’ve come full circle! 

It might seem anathema to some to consider writing a competitive sport, but as an aspiring writer, I entered every comp going! My first win was a Twitter micro fiction competition (back in the days of 140 characters!) and I kept going until I hit the amazing heights of the BCNA shortlist. Writing competitions aren’t for everyone – the odds are not ever in your favour and the likelihood is you will fail. And if you do list, or even win, there are no guarantees of success.

But … if you can stomach with that, competitions provide interesting benefits (besides the chance to walk away with a prize). They are great motivators, providing hard deadlines of the sort you might get from a publisher; they force you to scrutinise your work, helping you become a better editor; and they acclimatise you to having professionals read your work and, if you’re lucky, critique it.  

If you’re going to enter competitions, my advice is to try and enter with friends; turn it into a team sport, where successes can be vicarious, and failure can be shared and contextualised. Also, be clear on why you’re entering and manage your expectations. What do you hope to accomplish? Achieving a listing, or a notable mention is a fantastic addition to your query letter, and getting used to rejection will set you in good stead for any writing journey. 

When it comes to The Housetrap, my main desire is for readers to have fun. I wanted to write a thrilling adventure, something that makes you gasp and squeal, with delight and just a little bit of terror – like riding your bike super fast downhill. But there are some messages to take away too – I’ve already mentioned Deliah’s smarts, but also I want readers (perhaps especially girls) to see that maths has value. I volunteer at my local primary school, helping out with maths and I see too many girls in KS2 with self-imposed barriers to the subject. I hope the book speaks to them, just a little. 

More broadly, appropriately scary books can be beneficial to children’s emotional development. There are a lot of studies across this subject but in a nutshell, readers can experience fear, almost practice it, in a safe environment and learn to recognise their own personal tolerance for risk. One of my favourite pieces of feedback for the book has been from readers wondering what they would do in the same situation. How would they respond, how would they escape? Allowing readers a ‘run-through’ like this, of their feelings, allows them to be challenged and grow emotionally, in a safe environment. 

As much as I’d love to scare the living daylights out of Deliah and the gang again, in all likelihood it’s probably not going to happen. If there were to be a sequel, I do have a seed of an idea as to what that might look like, so never say never – it might turn up as a short story or a freebie on my Substack!  

Emma Read is the author of The Housetrap, and the Milton series (Chicken House), including Milton the Mighty, one of The Times Best Children’s Books of 2019 and shortlisted for the Bath Children’s Novel Award.
She loves all things spooky (and spidery!) and can often be found walking through her local graveyard … but only in daylight. Like Mark Gatiss, she doesn’t believe in ghosts, but is scared of them. Connect with Emma at @emmydee73 (Twitter), @ediereadie (Instagram), subscribe at emmaread.substack.com/ for exclusive content, and get in touch at emmareadauthor.com   
Like his career, Steve’s writing is filled with tech and engineering, although his speculative thrillers tend to have higher stakes and fewer meetings. Before he found himself advising companies on digital transformation, Steve was a copywriter, a magazine editor, a communications director, a product designer and a webcaster, though not at the same time. Home is South London, where he lives with his wife and teenage daughters. They wish he’d stop saying, ‘What if…’

Stay tuned for Steve’s review of The Housetrap in our autumn/winter issue, coming soon!

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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