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Alexandra Benedict on middle grade debut The Merry Christmas Murders

Brooke Parkin not expecting it to be a very merry Christmas. She is an anxious autistic ADHDer whose only friend is her loyal support dog, Buoy, and the headmaster of her new school has died in mysterious circumstances.

And then she meets the other members of the Neurokind Club, an after-school group for neurodivergent kids. Together, Brooke and the rest of the club must embrace their strengths and their growing friendship to solve the murders and make Christmas merry after all.

I was really surprised that, for me, the process of writing for kids was really similar to that of for adults, aside from getting the tone right for middle grade (not too dark, not too light) and making motives for the murders age appropriate.

I loved the spooky atmospheres, the plots, and how they all used different skills to solve the mystery, something I hope also appears in The Merry Christmas Murders. Most of all, I absolutely adored George – she was so strong and clever.

I was really inspired by how she rejected expectations of what it is to be female. And who didn’t love Timmy the dog? Buoy, Brooke’s support animal, is directly inspired by Timmy.

I am really driven by writing fully rounded neurodivergent characters. Looking back, all of my main characters have been ND, even if at the time I didn’t know it! I love Brooke’s bravery – she is so anxious, all of the time, and it takes her real courage to not hide it. She inspires me to get outside when I otherwise would stay in for days.

In the run up to Christmas, I revel in festive activities such as Christmas markets, wreath making, going on the Polar Express, seeing friends, making decorations, etc. From Christmas Eve on, I relish being at home with my little family, eating lots, watching lots, playing lots and laughing even more. I love Christmas SO MUCH!

Fun, kind, inclusive.

The Neurokind Club will be back next year in The Jingle Bell Murders! I’m writing it at the moment, alongside my next adult Christmas mystery, The Advent of Death.

Read and write as much as you can, in different genres and styles! A classic piece of advice in creative writing circles is to ‘write what you know’, but I advise writing about what you’d like to know.

What fascinates you? What story has gripped you so much that you have to tell it?

Finding purpose in your writing is really important as it’s a very difficult industry to get into, and even harder to stay in, so believing in yourself and your words is essential. I’d also advise finding other writer friends to celebrate with when you have success and commiserate with at all other times!

Alexandra Benedict is a USA Today bestselling and award-winning writer for children and adults. Her novels, including the Gold Dagger shortlisted The Christmas Murder Game and Little Red Death are published in twenty territories.

Huge thanks to Laura Jones for preparing the interview questions. Laura is one of our regular contributors and her reviews feature in issues of PaperBound Magazine. Read her review of The Merry Christmas Murders in our autumn/winter issue by checking out our issues page.

Laura Jones is a secondary school teacher in Cornwall. She teaches English and Media and recently completed an MA in Publishing. Laura is part of a local writing group and hopes to eventually complete one of the many book ideas she has saved on her laptop, some of which are inspired by the Cornish landscape.

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Abdullah's Bear Needs A Name! Illustration 1 by Sophie Benmouyal
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Guest post: Shirley-Anne Brightman and Yasmin Hanif on The Power of Storytelling and Using Your Own Name

By Shirley-Anne Brightman and Yasmin Hanif

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Storytelling has long been a tradition in many cultures around the world. In older generations in South Asian Pakistani culture, oral storytelling is often the only way stories were shared and passed down.

When I began working with a charming, little school in Glasgow on their ‘We Can Be Heroes’ project helping primary school children to see themselves in the stories they read, I had no idea how central the story of how the project began would be to the project itself, and indeed my unwritten book at that point. In fact, my few years with the schools, saw an ocean of stories; from fiction, non-fiction, memoir to something in between fill the school.

Shirley-Anne Brightman, the pioneer of the project and the Principal Teacher explains how our collaboration came about…

Shirley-Anne’s Story

When I was on playground duty, some of the older pupils came up to me asking for help: “Mrs Brightman, we don’t know enough names, can you help us?” Totally confused, I asked them to explain. They were preparing a Guess the Name of the Teddy fundraising activity and needed 30 names to be chosen by players; so far they had James, Emily and Belinda.

“I don’t understand, what about your name, Zainab? Or yours, Anum? There’s Eesa over there, Mohammed, Zeenat … we have 300 children in the school, what’s wrong with their names?” I asked with slight concern. I feared I knew what their reasons might be.

“You can’t call a teddy those names!” they said in complete sincerity.

“Why not?” I replied, matching their tone as nearly as I could.

It wasn’t the first time we had observed a disregard in our pupils for their own identity. We had seen primary 1 children drawing self-portraits showing themselves with white skin when their own was brown.

Some of the ways we were trying to address the representation was in the reading schemes and class library books we were buying but the books we wanted to buy were hard to find, if not non-existent.

I went to our Headteacher. “We have to do something!” I told her. “It’s not right.”

So, we did.

We worked with the Scottish Black People, People of Colour Writers Network (SBPOC) to find writers who would work with our pupils to write our own stories. That’s when we met Yasmin.

Yasmin’s experience

During phase 1 of the project the children came up with various ideas such as superheroes and secret laboratories (‘The Zedriz’), a shipwreck and being stranded on a remote island (‘Home is Where the Heart Is’) to two sisters being trapped in a cave (‘Cave of Gemstones’). By this stage in our project, the stories the children came up with still reflected what they read themselves or watched on TV or YouTube.

It was during phase 3 of the project that I felt the storytelling and imagination of both the school and the community were really captured.

One of the parents of the pupils I was working with told me a real-life story based on her grandparents falling in love in India, and a golden bangle that had been passed down through the generations. She still wore those bangles to this day. This became one of the published stories from the project.

Beat of the Dhol, ‘We Can Be Heroes’, St Albert’s.
Illustration by Hannah Rounding.

I found that storytelling leaves a legacy, not just a physical one like those bangles but a legacy of confidence, and of empowerment for those pupils that I worked with at the school, and they would be taking that legacy with them into later life.

In the same way, Abdullah gets a teddy bear passed down through the generations from his Abba (or dad) in my debut picture book, Abdullah’s Bear Needs A Name! which was inspired by events from the school. Just the like kids at the school, Abdullah struggles to name his bear, until he hears an old story from his heritage.

The message on both accounts is a powerful one; that your name matters, that your stories matter, that you matter.

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Yasmin is a Scottish writer and educator. She was shortlisted for the Kavya Arts Prize in 2023 for her story which became her debut picture book, Abdullah’s Bear Needs A Name! (Floris, 2025). She was a writer in residence at a primary school and worked on their project to promote diversity and inclusion within children’s writing and publishing, which won the SAMEE Aspiring Writers Award and the Scottish Education Curriculum Innovation Award 2022.

Shirley-Anne Brightman studied languages at the University of Cambridge and holds an MSc in Social Policy from London School of Economics. She has taught in primary schools and English as a Second Language contexts in four countries. She is currently a Leader of Learning at Glasgow City Council’s Improvement Challenge which aims to close the poverty-related attainment gap.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine and blog for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Interview: A Grave Inheritance by Felicity Epps

A Grave Inheritance is a gothic murder mystery, delving into seances and spiritualism in Victorian London. My main character Dolores Rain is grieving the loss of her parents and older sister, but when ghostly occurrences point to dark secrets within her house, she teams up with her friends to unveil the truth…and solve a murder!

I had so much fun writing this novel, because I was able to indulge all my favourite themes, from spirits and haunted houses to mysterious apothecaries and mourning fashion. It is very much a reflection of the kind of novels that I like to read, so the inspiration for the novel came from cosy nights reading ghost stories!

Dolores appeared as a fully-fledged character from the start – I think because I indulged her quirks and worries, it all seemed to come naturally! The first scene in the novel was also the first vision that I had for the story: Dolores anxiously declaring that she must be on her “deathbed”, while also mourning how many novels she still has to read.

It felt like such an engaging start for a murder mystery, because Dolores is not set up to be a particularly good investigator – she is overly fearful and really just wants to retreat to her bed. As the novel progresses though, I really enjoyed having her confidence grow, especially once she learns to trust her friends and realises that she can confront the things that frighten her.

The theme of power was always such a key element, because women in the Victorian era lacked independence and the freedom to govern a lot of their own decisions. Dolores finds herself in a unique position being granted her family’s inheritance, but it still comes with the expectations of London society, as she is pressured to get married.

This theme of power then evolved for me, as I quickly realised that ghosts were not the only danger in the novel – from Dolores’ nerves being dismissed as hysteria to the looming threat of being sent to an asylum, Dolores and her friends, Ada and Violet, struggle to be taken seriously. Eventually, the girls form The Society of Free Spirits, hoping that by embracing seances and spiritualism, they will finally be able to make their voices heard.

A symptom of Dolores’ grief is that it has made her world feel claustrophobic. This element definitely strengthened the supernatural aspect of the novel, allowing the haunted house to feel restrictive as well.

I think Dolores would have struggled to overcome her fears if she hadn’t had the outside encouragement of the other characters – Ada does an amazing job of dragging Dolores into society and helping her rediscover the pleasures of life that have been lost in her grief. Meanwhile, the spiritual medium, Violet, helps Dolores find her voice, asking questions that have been ignored by many of the male characters in the book.

I do like to imagine that Dolores always had this resilience within her; she just had to remember it! In the novel, she often feels overwhelmed in social situations, but then finds her strength again in quiet moments. Through all her ghostly experiences, she doesn’t want to give up – and this desire to look for answers pushes her through, even when she wants to shut her front door and ignore the outside world!

When I used to imagine being published, I’d fantasise about finding my novel on a shelf in a bookshop. So now, to have A Grave Inheritance popping up in Waterstones windows has been absolutely beyond my hopes as a debut author!

I have loved seeing the apothecary bottles, candles and skulls that have appeared in such creative displays across the stores. I’m so grateful to all the amazing booksellers that have championed the novel, and I like to think that A Grave Inheritance has ushered in spooky season early this year!

I’m currently working on a sequel to A Grave Inheritance, which will be Book 2 in The Society of Free Spirits series. I’m so excited to share more about Dolores, Ada and Violet, as they embark on further ghostly investigations!

While Dolores’ house can feel gloomy and oppressive, I’m keen to delve more into the world of her friend Ada – exploring the glittering ballrooms of Victorian high society, where dark secrets are kept closely hidden.

My main advice would be to finish a first draft without worrying about it being perfect. When I first started writing, I wanted each chapter to be just right, before moving onto the next. But now, I focus on letting the characters lead me to the end of the novel and save worrying about plot holes for future revisions.

I find this gives me a better perspective on the project overall, and it’s such an uplifting feeling to have a manuscript in your hands – even a messy first draft!

Felicity Epps studied a degree in English Literature before completing a Masters in Eighteenth-Century Studies, where her research focused on female murderers in true crime writing! Felicity finds inspiration in history; researching strange and spooky subjects. She enjoys exploring cemeteries, collecting old books and hunting for ghostly Victorian photographs in antique shops.

Felicity currently lives in Broadstairs, Kent, UK, with her partner, Josh, and their baby daughter, Madeline. When she isn’t writing, Felicity loves going to the beach, knitting colourful jumpers and drinking far too many cups of hot chocolate. A Grave Inheritance is her debut novel.

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Branford Boase Award 2025: Faber & Faber editor Alice Swan on Glasgow Boys

Author Margaret McDonald with Faber & Faber editors Alice Swan and Ama Badu
Author Margaret McDonald with Faber & Faber editors Alice Swan and Ama Badu

Working on Margaret McDonald’s Glasgow Boys was – joyfully – one of my favourite sort of edits. Often an edit can feel like a puzzle that you’re trying to put together and the desire is to have every piece in place at the end. However, the starting point for each book isn’t always the same. Sometimes it feels like the pieces are out of shape, or that half of them are hiding down the back of the sofa and there’s a question mark over whether they will all be found!

However, with Glasgow Boys, the starting point felt full of hope: looking down on the first draft, all the puzzle pieces were face up and on the table – the perfect story was there for the taking, we just had to rearrange the pieces into the right order. 

To step away from the metaphor for a moment, what I mean is that Margaret’s writing was exquisite, and her characters, Banjo and Finlay, felt fully formed from the first read. Working with my colleague, Ama Badu, our editorial mission was to ensure that the reading experience felt like a real ride – that the tension and the suspense built up to those moments of release.

I hate to say it, but we wanted to make readers cry!

We wanted to take them on an emotional journey, leaving them full of hope and love at the end. Luckily, that’s very much what Margaret wanted too, so we worked comfortably and carefully alongside her to help her shape her story into the best version of itself. 

Every edit is different, but the conditions for a good edit remain the same. It’s our job to be able to look down on the story from above, to see that puzzle and to think about what each book needs. The main thing an edit needs is time. It simply isn’t a job that can be done alongside checking emails or attending meetings.

Faber & Faber editor, Alice Swan

In order to really see a story as a whole, editing can take one, two, three or even more consecutive days of solid, uninterrupted concentration. For me, I need to be offline and in an entirely separate room to my laptop in order to harness the level of deep thinking required.

Editing is a skill I have honed over many years, and with experience comes further clarity about just what a story might need. It’s a skill that needs to be taught, cherished and protected, and above all given the luxury of time. 

Author Margaret McDonald

At the end of the Glasgow Boys edit, which took five months in the end, it really did feel like every piece was where it should be. It felt like a real mic-drop moment – it was done. There wasn’t a single word out of place. And that, for an editor, is a rare and extraordinary feeling.  

Check out guest post with Faber & Faber editor Ama Badu here.

Faber & Faber editor, Ama Badu

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Set up in memory of author Henrietta Branford and her editor Wendy Boase, the Branford Boase Award is the only award to recognise the editor as well as the author. Find out more about this year’s award on the website.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Branford Boase Award 2025: Ama Badu on editing award-winning novel, Glasgow Boys

By the time it comes to the very first edit of any story, I’ve already read the manuscript a number of times. I’ve been on a journey with the characters and their world. For me, those first reads are the most precious because I learn something new about them every time. It’s a little like meeting a soon-to-be friend for the first time, and then again, and then again. You see something different on every encounter and they become dearer to you.

What I also observe with each read are my own emotions. How do I feel in this chapter and is this the way the author intends for me to feel? In a book like Glasgow Boys, this is especially important. The emotional experience is a core part of the reading experience and so I’d note down the moments that made my heart stop or tears build up. These observations followed me throughout the editing process.  

I enjoyed working collaboratively with Alice on Glasgow Boys. Editing can be a solitary process. It requires concentrated time and deep thought. Once those thoughts are in place, it then requires conversation. Usually, this is with the author, but in this case, Alice and I had each other to bounce ideas from.

We’d discuss every detail together, the moments that lingered with us the most, which chapters had the most punch, how the structure could be reworked to deliver more of the needed emotional pull. Many questions came out of those meetings. How do we get Banjo and Finlay from this point to that? Is this section working as strongly as it could here, or would it be more impactful there? Do we need to see this or that on the page more?

Raising these questions between ourselves first was such a useful exercise. In those conversations, we could see the parts of the story that resonated with each of us personally and where they differed. There is such an alchemy to editing and when two combine ideas, such magic happens. Alice and I often talk about this process as placing puzzle pieces together. We could see from the very start what image we were working on, we then had to figure out where each piece would fit. We passed ideas back and forth to each other and in doing so, we clarified our vision. 

Faber & Faber editor, Alice Swan

As a junior editor at the time, working alongside Alice and her wealth of experience taught me a great deal. There is much to be said about the training newer editors receive. Editing is a skill, one that is best harnessed through practice. Seeing other experienced editors at work is such a crucial part of the process and cannot be overlooked. There’s a proverb that talks about iron sharpening iron, just as one person sharpens another. Those editorial conversations and observing Alice at work certainly sharpened my skills and made me a more confident editor. 

Once we had our thoughts together, we then shared them with (the author) Margaret. This requires such trust, as it does with every author. Their manuscripts are a labour of love and as editors, our role is to polish them, to make them as strong as they can be for the readers.

Once again, a beautiful alchemy happened here with Margaret. We were working from such a rich tapestry and the three of us had a clear understanding of who Banjo and Finlay were and how they would develop from when we first met them to the last page of the novel. And so we worked, turned over every detail and questioned every word on the page. It was such a harmonious process.

Author Margaret McDonald

A book like Glasgow Boys emphasised the place of grace and care at every point. Not just because of the experiences of our beloved characters but also because of our responsibility to our readers. We had them in mind at every point, being sure to leave them the hope that we all desperately need to see. It was such a joy to see Margaret at work here too. With every draft I marvelled at how far she pushed her story.

The glowing reception Glasgow Boys has received is a testament to that.

Faber & Faber editor, Ama Badu

Guest post with Faber & Faber editor Alice Swan to follow.

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Set up in memory of author Henrietta Branford and her editor Wendy Boase, the Branford Boase Award is the only award to recognise the editor as well as the author. Find out more about this year’s award on the website.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

All our issues are completely free and run by volunteers, however if you would like to support PaperBound and the work we do, you can help us out by buying us a virtual book. We appreciate any support you can give us!

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Interview: SF Said on The Children’s Bookshow

As a children’s author, I visit schools up and down the country every week, talking to children about reading and writing and books.  The Children’s Bookshow organises brilliant large-scale events, where children from many schools come together in a fantastic venue to see an author, and then we do follow-up workshops in their classrooms.  Last year, I did this in Coventry, and it was one of the most exciting and rewarding events I’ve ever done, so this year, I’m delighted to be doing it again in Peterborough!

The Children’s Bookshow gives every single child who participates a free copy of a book written by the author they’re seeing.  I think this is beyond wonderful!  Normally when you do events, some kids get a book and some don’t.  But with The Children’s Bookshow, access to books is equal for everyone.  For some children, this will be the first book they’ve ever owned.  And we know from the research that reading for pleasure has the biggest positive impact of any factor on children’s life chances, so you can’t put a price on that – it really is life-changing!

I write the books that I want to read myself!  My first book, Varjak Paw, was about a cat who dreams of being a great warrior, and learns a secret martial art known only to cats.  My newest book, Tyger, is about a boy, a girl and a tyger who change the world.  With each book I write, I want it to be the very best book it can be, so I do everything I can to make it as good as I can.  That takes me many years, and many drafts.  The thing I enjoy most is hearing responses from readers – it makes all the hard work of writing feel more than worthwhile! 

I was very lucky, because everyone in my family loves books and stories, so I grew up surrounded by them.  Reading always seemed like fun to me, and I think that’s the best tip I can give you: never make reading seem like hard work, or a punishment!  Let it be fun.  Give children access to the widest possible range of books, let them choose freely for themselves, and then let them read for pure pleasure, with no strings attached.  If you do this, even the most reluctant readers might just surprise you – I’ve seen it happen many times!

There are several great ways to get involved with The Children’s Bookshow this year. Firstly, I’d encourage everyone to check the website to see if the 2025 tour is coming to a venue near you. If it is, why not tell your teacher or school librarian? They might be able to organise a school trip.

Even if you can’t make it to a live event, you can still be part of the experience by exploring The Children’s Bookshow website. There are fantastic photos and write-ups of all the events, so you can see what happens at the shows and discover new books and authors.

The website is also packed with great resources and activities around the featured books – for example, there are some Tyger resources on there now. At the end of the tour there will be a creative competition that is open to everyone to enter too. Last year’s winner got to meet Michael Rosen!

Like all writers, I’m really just a reader who took one more step.  I wanted to pass on the excitement I felt when I read my favourite books, like Watership Down, or saw my favourite films, like Star Wars.  My current project is very much connected to Tyger.  It’s not a sequel, or a prequel – it’s a parallel story set in another alternate world.  I feel sure it’s going to be my best book yet when it’s done, but it’s not there yet – it takes as long as it takes to make a book as good as you can make it!

First, forget about writing! Just think of yourself as a reader, and ask yourself, as a reader, if you could have any story to read, what would it be?  Whatever the answer (and there are no wrong answers), I think you should then write that story yourself.  And finally, keep working on it, draft after draft, until it’s as good as you’d want a story to be, as a reader.  That’s really all I do, as a writer – and young readers can do it too, at any age!

SF Said’s first book, Varjak Paw, won the Nestlé Smarties Prize for Children’s Literature, and was listed by BookTrust as one of the 100 best children’s books of the past 100 years.  The Outlaw Varjak Paw won the BBC Blue Peter Book Of The Year; Phoenix represented the UK on the IBBY International Honour Book List; while his most recent book Tyger won Children’s Book Of The Year at the British Book Awards, Children’s Book Of The Year at The Week Junior Book Awards, and the Foyles Children’s Book Of The Year.

Keep up to date with SF Said on his website.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine and blog for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Branford Boase Award 2025: Amie Jordan on working with Chicken House editor Rachel Leyshon for shortlisted novel, All the Hidden Monsters

I met my characters Sage, Oren and P. And the rest, as they say, was history.

But the rest, as I say, would not have been possible without Rachel Leyshon, my editor at Chicken House.

Chicken House editor, Rachel Leyshon

See, my biggest problem is that I can’t stop talking. I consider it quite a fun fact (my mother less so) that every school report I ever received from nursery to college said ‘Amie talks too much and distracts others’ – my recent diagnosis of ADHD explains a lot – and this very clearly translates into my writing. My ability to stick to a wordcount in a first draft is truly laughable.

Then if we add my OCD into the mix (I know, almost a whole neurodivergent set!) know that I’m constantly compelled to over explain in obsessive and totally unnecessary detail. And if this is a blogpost about honesty I might as well also note that I don’t plot or write in numerical chapter order either. That’s because my OCD thrives off lists, and plotting chapters out is simply tantamount to writing down a big ol’ list, right? And once a list is written it’s set in stone.

The OCD really struggles to change it up. Naturally, this can make the editing process later on pretty tricky to deal with! So anyway, I just find that if I’m not writing in a chapter linear/list order, it somehow all feels easier to move around later. If anyone is interested to know, the first scene I wrote in ATHM eventually settled in as part of chapter thirty-six.

Does any of that writing process make sense?

No, it doesn’t.

But the point I’m trying to make is that despite all that, despite the fact I know it’s not ideal but can’t help it anyway, Rachel didn’t instantly balk. Between all the initial chaos she was still able to see the vision, sift through and highlight what worked, what was unnecessary over complication, and work to understand exactly what I was trying to achieve, guiding me there in the parts I wasn’t quite pulling it off.

I’m totally aware that some days it would’ve been so much easier to just tell me what to do, but she never did. She has the patience of a saint and is such an inspiration and an encouragement to someone like me specifically, knowing the traits I’ve always let overwhelm and hold me back have not mattered. Proof that people like me can make it with the right editor at the helm.

So my advice to any aspiring writers, but especially to those that see themselves reflected in me, would be this: it’s actually fine not to be perfect right away. It’s fine to be flawed. And for God’s sake, don’t torture yourself over it. If working with Rachel has taught me anything, it’s that if you truly have that spark of magic to begin with then it’s always going to be in there somewhere, and the right people will be able to see it. The very best of them will make you thrive.

I wasted so many years not having the self-belief or the confidence in my own work, knowing that I was too chaotic to ever be the shiny, impossibly perfect writer I thought I had to be from the start if I ever wanted to succeed in this childhood dream of being an author. I wish I’d been braver sooner.

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Amie Jordan is from Salford and studied Film and Media at Manchester Metropolitan University. When she isn’t writing she spends her time knitting, having provided bespoke pieces for the costume departments of film, TV and theatre. All the Lost Souls, the sequel to All the Hidden Monsters, is out now!

Set up in memory of author Henrietta Branford and her editor Wendy Boase, the Branford Boase Award is the only award to recognise the editor as well as the author. Find out more about this year’s shortlisted books on the website. The winner will be announced on Wednesday 9 July.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

All our issues are completely free and run by volunteers, however if you would like to support PaperBound and the work we do, you can help us out by buying us a virtual book. We appreciate any support you can give us!

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Interview: Best of All Worlds by Kenneth Oppel

It’s a survival thriller in which Xavier, my teenaged hero, wakes one morning to find that his family’s lakeside cottage has been moved somewhere completely different. When he, his father, and heavily pregnant stepmother go to explore, they find themselves on a farm – hens, two Nubian goats, thriving crops! When they wander further, they realize they’re trapped inside a dome.

I wondered how people would react to finding themselves in an inexplicable situation – what kind of story you’d need to tell yourself to make sense of it, what your plan of action would be. I also wrote the novel because I was fed up with conspiracy theorists, science deniers (especially deniers of climate change), and people who mangled the concept of freedom to justify hate, racism, and blatant self-interest. The world is hard enough for adults to navigate; for kids it must be even more bewildering, being deluged with misinformation.

Oh yes! I learned a lot about sustainable farming, the best kind of milk goats to get (also how to breed, castrate and butcher them). I read about the best time to plant certain crops and harvest them. I went down way to manner research rabbit holes. I also, sadly, had to research various conspiracy theories and the people who perpetrated them.

I am a big plotter and planner, and spend a lot of time “daydreaming” the world of the story before I start chapter one. But during the writing there are always delightful surprises. The biggest was probably the decision to introduce another family into the dome, one that had vastly different values than the first.

Usually the concept or setting. Best of All Worlds was definitely concept; books like Airborn and The Boundless were the settings.

Don’t expect it to be perfect the first time. If you get stuck somewhere in the story, jump to another place. Get as much feedback as possible from trusted readers.

Having a book in outer space. Airborn went to the ISS for six months with Canadian astronaut Robert Thirsk, and I got to meet him afterwards, and see my space book – though sadly they didn’t let me keep it!

I have a couple novels vying for attention at the moment. One involves U-Boats, the other a young rock band behaving badly.

Kenneth Oppel is the bestselling author of many books, including Airborn, which won the Governor General’s Award for children’s literature and a Michael L Printz Honor Book Award, and the Silverwing trilogy, which has sold over a million copies worldwide. Some of his other books include Ghostlight, The Boundless, Every Hidden Thing, and Inkling. The Nest and Half Brother both won the Canadian Library Association’s Book of the Year for Children Award. Kenneth lives in Toronto with his family.

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Aphrodite by Bryony Pearce book cover. Bright pink background against a single yellow eye with long lashes
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Interview: Aphrodite by Bryony Pearce

Aphrodite is a retelling of the life of the Greek goddess of love and beauty, a story that contains themes of power, love, betrayal and family.  

I have always loved myths from around the world and characters from mythology have appeared in many of my other novels: Angels Fury contains Nephilim; The Weight of Souls, Anubis; in Savage Island Carmen is a modern day Maenad; Hannah Messenger and the Gods of Hockwold contains many of the Greek gods.  

I have a particular fascination with Greek mythology and have been wanting to construct a complete Greek myth retelling for some time. Aphrodite struck me as the perfect vehicle for a modern rewrite, with the confusion about her birth, the possibilities of her power and the way she is a catalyst in so many stories.

I am so glad you saw the power in Aphrodite, as I was keen to give her that strength. In many ways she represents womanhood as a whole, and her story highlights the dangers for powerful women when they threaten the status quo.  

I loved writing the scenes where her power emerges, where she literally battles for her life. I also loved writing the scenes where she uses her cunning, hidden behind the mask of her pretty face.

What I found most difficult was remembering to make sure that she retained her innocence and didn’t have more knowledge than she should. It is easy to allow authorial voice to creep in, for example, in naming plants, animals and so on, so I had to keep checking myself – does she know this yet? How would she react to this thing that is so strange to her? What would she do here? How would she learn? Who will teach her?

I am one of the strictest plotters you’ll ever meet. I do character work, world-building research (I researched an awful lot about Ancient Greece from food to clothes to geography, politics, marriage customs and religious observations). Then I plan every beat of the story in advance. Following this, I write a chapter outline. And only then do I start to write.  

Some writers feel that writing like this removes the freshness from their work and cannot bring themselves to do it, but I feel that it allows me to focus on the language rather than worrying about what is going to happen next, to construct beautiful scenes, to ensure that everything fits together, that every action has consequences, that every scene moves the story on and every word has a role to play, and I can seed, early on, themes and elements that will be important much later.

I have always been a fan of world mythology. From a pre-teen I I had books about various myths, Egyptian tombs, the lives of the Mayans and Aztecs and explorations of religions and how they developed.  

My favourite stories have always been folklore and myths, from Havelock the Dane to King Arthur. Pantheons and heroes fascinate me and have so much to say about the values of a culture and how, ultimately, we are all so similar.

This is the thirteenth full length novel I have had published (and I’m hoping it isn’t unlucky number thirteen). I started to write in 2004, with the aim of seeing if it was possible for me to write a novel. I had no intention of trying for publication. However, once it was ‘finished’, I realised that I had a lot of love for it, and approached agents, who sent me to Cornerstones Literary Consultancy for feedback. After a rewrite following their advice, I entered the SCBWI Undiscovered Voices Competition 2008 and was one of the winners. From there I got my first agent and, in 2009, my first book deal.  

I also write short stories for adults which have appeared in various anthologies and magazines.  

In terms of tips for other writers, I would recommend that you read widely within your genre, and that once you have taken your first draft as far as you can alone, seek constructive feedback before approaching agents, whether that be through paid support such as literary consultancies, or through writing groups, mentors, or critique centres such as Wattpad.

I also recommend entering competitions, which are usually run by industry professionals, who might remember you and which often have great prizes from free feedback to book deals. Be polite, persistent, resilient and keep your love of writing – that is the most important thing, that you keep loving what you do

I am hoping to see my third adult thriller on the shelves, which is doing the rounds with publishers at the moment. This is set in London, and involves a woman who ends up entangled in a children’s game, gone terribly wrong. The current title is Simon Says.  

I am hoping also to write a sequel to Aphrodite, which goes into her role in the Trojan War (which in my version she starts deliberately, as a gift to her lover, Ares).  

I will be able to write the sequel if Aphrodite does well, so … hint, hint …

Imagine that you wake, full grown, in a strange world, naked and alone, with no memory and no skills. Where are you? Why and how did you end up there? Do you have the ability to survive, or are you helpless? What are your priorities (shelter, clothing, food, exploration, weapons etc.)? Do you receive help and support from the locals, or are you in great danger? What do you find when you explore? What do you become?

Bryony Pearce is a multi-award-winning novelist and short story writer. She has written a mixture of thrillers, paranormal adventures, science fiction and horror, for Mid-grade, Young Adult and Adult readers. Her most recent novels are based on Greek mythology: Hannah Messenger and the Gods of Hockwold, for readers aged 9-12, and Aphrodite, for young adults.

In addition to writing her own novels, Bryony teaches creative writing at City University (London) and works as a consultant and mentor, in order to help aspiring authors achieve their dreams.

She lives in Gloucestershire and has two teenagers. Consequently she spends a lot of time at the side of sports fields, listening to concerts and being creative in car-parks.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Interview: The Notorious Virtues by Alwyn Hamilton

The Notorious Virtues is 1920’s New York meets Grimm Fairytales. A group of heiresses compete to win their family’s money and magic in a tournament of virtues.

There are so many pieces that came together to make this story. It’s partly inspired by all the folktales of “The King had 3 sons and he sent them on a quest for a McGuffin to decide the heir”.

It’s also inspired by my friend who is a social worker and once pointed out that there is a recurring narrative in fantasy of glorifying a young person’s lost birth parent at the expense of the adoptive parents. It’s very you were raised by peasants but secretly you’re royalty, which is a terrible narrative for adoptive kids or kids in the foster system. She wished that fantasy would include more positive adoption stories. Apparently what I heard was write a story that subverts the narrative of the glorious perfect birth family that makes you special.

Well since you bring up world, one of the number one mistakes I see aspiring fantasy writers make is feeling like they need to have the whole world built before they start writing the story. Yes, of course you need to know some things, but the world will grow as you write it. No matter how prepared you are, you will inevitably hit something you have to invent on the fly. Don’t let building the world stop you from telling the story. Most of the time it’s an excuse.

This book was a built over such a long period of time that I would struggle to tell you what originally was in there and what came in the writing. The character of August is probably the biggest component that came in after I had pitched it. I realized quickly that Nora needed someone to talk to and be her mystery investigator sidekick (August would say she is the sidekick). And I think with him the mystery became a more active part of the book.

A lot of the charms were born from necessity in the world. I think it got cut in editing, but there was a charm that kept high heels from sinking into the grass at garden parties. I have been to enough outdoor weddings that I would gladly take a charmed shoe!

Authors aren’t supposed to have favourites… but my favourite is Nora, also known as Honora Holtzfall, the once heiress apparent trying to win back her place in the family, while also solving her mother’s murder. Nora is such a mix of brains, sass and reckless self-confidence. Writing her, and especially her banter with August, was the most fun.

I’ve heard the saying that you never learn to write a book, you only learn how to write the book you’re currently writing (and the next one is a whole new beast). I think that’s true to an extent, but I have always written better in a café than in my house, so I try to have a rhythm of leaving the house.

I feel like if I reveal anything about book 2 a sniper will appear pointed at my head. I am currently writing it, the fairy tale aspect is way bigger than in book 1, lots of fun creatures to see. And after that I have an idea I am so so so excited by. But we’ll just have to wait to see if I sell it!

New York Times bestselling author Alwyn Hamilton was born in Toronto and spent her early years bouncing between Europe and Canada until her parents settled in France. She moved to the UK when she was 18 and has been here ever since as an author/bookseller. Her first novel Rebel of the Sands was sold in 14 territories and won the Goodreads Choice Award for best debut. Her fourth book The Notorious Virtues will release in 2025. Follow @alwynhamilton on TikTok.

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PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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