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Interview: John Hearne chats about his speculative sci-fi novel ‘Someone’s Been Messing With Reality’ for middle grade readers

So here’s my tagline – ‘When Martin Ryan sees a video of his father flying unaided through the air, he realises that everything he has assumed about his life up to this point has been a lie’.

The whole novel arose out of the following proposition: ‘What if you were an alien, but didn’t know it?’ The moment Martin discovers the truth is also the moment that his parents disappear. He and his friends Tina and Enda realise that their disappearance is part of a larger conspiracy which they must unravel and thwart.

What inspired me to write it? I liked that proposition. Like a lot of writers, I log all the different story ideas that occur to me. Most of these ideas will never go anywhere, but if I hit one that’s sufficiently intriguing and exciting, I’ll start sketching out where I might go with it. What kind of characters could carry this kind of plotline? Where could I set it? Where will the intrigue come from? Once the ball gets rolling, it takes on a life of its own.

I’m a plotter and a planner. I like to work out where I’m going to go before I get there – but things always surprise you during the writing phase. I like to think of my outline as a map. I’m going to use it to get to where I’m going, but if I spot something interesting that doesn’t lie along the planned route, I’ll go explore it. The writing process tends to generate fresh ideas, and I think you’ve got to be open to evaluating them rather than sticking rigidly to the original plan.

Also, I often find as I write that that clever little plot detail or character quirk that I thought would work actually doesn’t, so I often stop midstream and rethink things. I find too that once you’ve established how a character acts, you’ve often got to give them more freedom that the original plot allowed. In Someone’s Been Messing with Reality, Martin’s friend Tina caused both him and me a lot of grief through her impulsivity – I had to keep readjusting things when I realised that ‘Hmmm, Tina would never do that…’

The process was similar, though it did have a lot more steps. I spent a lot of time figuring out exactly what would happen with Indigo before I dived into draft 1, but because this was my first attempt at anything like this, draft 1 was pretty much like the first chair that a trainee carpenter might make. The back was crooked and all the legs were different lengths. It went through several redrafts before I arrived at something that I would willingly show anyone – and the finished product didn’t bear much resemblance to the first draft. It’s true that most books aren’t written, they’re rewritten.

The Very Dangerous Sisters of Indigo McCloud had a fictitious setting – the absurdly miserable town of Blunt, and was choc-full of outlandish characters. I wanted to set Someone’s Been Messing with Reality in the real world, and make the characters a little more human. This is sci-fi – yes – but the relationships and problems and characters themselves are all real, or as real as I could make them.

Enda is one of the three friends at the centre of the book. He’s recovering from a brain injury. The emotional arc of the story rests on the different ways in which his two friends deal with this. I’ve always had an interest in brain injury. I made a radio documentary for RTE Radio 1 a few years ago about someone who was recovering from a very serious head injury. The weird thing is that after I had started work on this book, and after I had written Enda into it, I fell and hit my head. I gave myself what would be termed a ‘mild brain injury’. It may not have been life threatening, but it was very debilitating.

To cut a very long story short, I suffered from prolonged bouts of fatigue and could do very little work of any kind for a long time. Thankfully I’m fully recovered now, but the process took a couple of years. I couldn’t use a computer for much of that recovery. I had damaged the visual cortex at the back of the head, and my brain simply couldn’t deal with the kind of light that emanated from the screen. So much of this book was actually written longhand.

It has been lengthy! Much rejection, much rethinking, rewriting, repositioning. Getting published is hard and getting harder. This book – my second – was a little easier than the first, because I had a good relationship with the publisher, and they were happy to read what I wrote, but it had to reach a higher standard to get through. Rising costs have made it more difficult for independent publishers to take a chance on something, so they’ve got to love it before they’ll agree to put scarce resources on the line.

Since my book is science fiction, I’ll stick to that. My favourite in the genre is When You Reach Me by Rebecca Stead. A wonderful book, with a plot that rumbles slowly under the surface – you don’t quite realise that it’s sci-fi until close to the end. I also really like Ender’s Game by Orson Scott Card, the Dune books and The Iron Giant. My kids also love Hilo: The boy who crashed to earth by Judd Winick.

Much of the standard advice is correct. I think you need to do three things – read in the genre you’re writing in, develop your craft by reading about writing or taking classes, and finally, get feedback on your work. The third one is the one that most of us struggle with, but if you’re ambitious for your writing, you need to show it to people – and not just any people – I’m talking about people who understand the market and know what good writing looks like.

The other thing I’d say is that if your sole ambition is to get published, you are probably letting yourself in for a great deal of misery. Unless you’re exceptionally talented and blindingly lucky, the chances of getting published early in the game are low.

I write because I want to get published, yes, but I also write because I love to write. If you don’t love it for its own sake, I would chuck it in. You only get so much time on earth, so you’ve got to get something out of the journey. Without a love of the process, the time will feel wasted, and the destination – even if you do reach it – will not live up to expectations.

I’m working on something alright, but as we speak it’s an unholy mess. I’ll let you know if and when something readable emerges from it …

Photo courtesy of David Ruffles

John Hearne was born in Wexford, Ireland in 1970. He worked as an economist in Dublin before changing direction and becoming a freelance writer. He has ghostwritten and edited a range of bestselling books, while his journalism has appeared in numerous national and international newspapers and magazines.

His first middle grade novel, The Very Dangerous Sisters of Indigo McCloud was published to critical acclaim by Little Island in 2021. His second book Someone’s Been Messing with Reality is out now. You can find him on Instagram @johnhearneauthor.

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Guest Blog Post: Branford Boase Award Judge, Christine Pillainayagam, on the 2024 shortlist

Brandford Boase Award 2024

When I wrote my debut novel Ellie Pillai Is Brown, I wrote it for me. Or more accurately, for 15 year old me. A girl who’d never seen herself – a brown, second generation, Catholic, Tamil immigrant – reflected in the world around her. Not in books or magazines or films or music. The places she looked to for comfort and guidance, never showed her a version of who she could be. Growing up, that feeling of invisibility, of not belonging, sticks. Like glue on the inside of a book spine, it forms a fundamental part of your structure.

Decades later, I sat down at my computer and a book began to pour out of me. I remember vividly the feeling of typing the first words onto a blank page – My name is Ellie. Ellie Pillai – and so my hero was born. Both me, and so much more than me, Ellie is a 15 year old brown girl caught between two cultures – a traditional Tamil upbringing with her family at home, and the life of a classic British teenager at school.

This story, loosely based on some of my own experiences as a music obsessed teenager growing up in a predominantly white area, is what the book industry describes as ‘own voice’ – meaning exactly that. A book written by an author with intimate knowledge and understanding of the material, because it is lived first hand.

As a debut author, taking an ‘own voice’ story into the world can be frightening. It can feel as if not simply your writing is being judged, but yourself and the validity and relevance of your experiences. I was told time and time again, by agents and publishers alike, that my story wasn’t really a story. That there wasn’t a ‘hook’ or a sense of jeopardy, yet to me, I felt the transformation of this shy 15 year old from someone determined to be invisible out of fear of racism, to someone with the courage to stand up and stand out, was a story needed by so many children today. Luckily, my brilliant agent and publisher agreed – and so did the judges of the Branford Boase Award who made me the winner of the prize in 2023.

Winning the BBA has had a profound impact on how I now view children’s stories and their importance in the world. The foundation they build in young people’s lives. The glue we create in their book spines. This year as a judge for the prize, I was delighted to see more ‘own voice’ stories being promoted by publishers. Books that speak to the reality of children’s lives and represent every version of who they are and who they could be.

With a longlist of 25 incredible books, my fellow judges and I had some spirited discussions about who would make the shortlist, but in the end, the word that comes to mind for all 6 shortlisted novels is ‘powerful’. Each one, through a mix of humour, joy, love, pain, fear, compassion, representation, felt powerful. Stories that stick with you long after you turn the final page.

Like the amazing You Think You Know Me by Ayaan Mohamud, which gripped the judges with its use of pace and tension as a terrible incident unfolds, and deals sensitively and beautifully with themes of racism, Islamophobia and microaggressions. Or the hilarious The Swifts by Beth Lincoln, a classic whodunnit full of twists and turns that has such a distinctive voice and is so cleverly layered with themes of identity and family that it becomes a celebration of individuality. The Jhalak Prize winning Safiyyah’s War by Hiba Noor Khan, a compassionate story full of heart, which taught us something we didn’t know, then made us want to learn more about it. The brilliant The First Move by Jenny Ireland, a YA love story with depth, that speaks openly and authentically about disability and covers themes from LGBTQIA+, to mental health and housing security. The outstanding The Final Move by Matt Goodfellow, a verse novel that draws you into a world so often unrepresented in children’s books – a hopeful, playful masterpiece.

And of course, our wonderful 2024 Branford Boase Award winner Steady For This by Nathanael Lessore, a book of joy, emotion, light and shade. A story that confronts heavy subject matter in a life affirming and generous way. We wanted to push this brilliantly funny book into the hands of as many children as we could.

Each of these powerful novels represents the future of children’s books. One that is filled with hope and safety, whoever you are.

The Final Year Matt Goodfellow, illustrated by Joe Todd-Stanton, edited by Charlotte Hacking (Otter-Barry Books)

The First Move by Jenny Ireland, edited by Ruth Knowles with Sara Jafari (Penguin)

Safiyyah’s War by Hiba Noor Khan, edited by Eloise Wilson (Andersen Press)

Steady for This by Nathanael Lessore, edited by Ella Whiddett and Ruth Bennett (Hot Key Books)

The Swifts by Beth Lincoln, illustrated by Claire Powell, edited by Ben Horslen and Julie Strauss-Gabel (Puffin)

You Think You Know Me by Ayaan Mohamud, edited by Sarah Stewart (Usborne)

Brandford Boase Award 2024
Christine Pillainayagam was born in Norwich, grew up in Sheringham and attended school in Holt and Norwich. She now lives in Faversham in Kent.  She is a writer and retail strategist. A mild obsession with The Beatles and the desire to write a story that reflected her own experiences growing up as a first-generation immigrant led her to put that love of music and words into a book. Ellie Pillai is Brown features songs written by the protagonist, Ellie, and they are available to listen to via QR codes in the book. Ellie Pillai is Brown was shortlisted for the Waterstones Children’s Book Award and the Jhalak Children’s and YA Prize and won the 2023 Branford Boase Award.

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Interview: Clare Pollard chats about her new middle grade fantasy ‘The Untameables’

Cover illustration by Reena Makwana

I’ve always absolutely loved Arthurian myth, from the sword in stone to the lady of the lake, faeries to questing beasts. But reading the tales to my children I was suddenly very conscious both that the legend of the ‘round table’ has been used historically to defend the idea of a ‘ruling class’, and that the stories are very violent. I suddenly had a very clear vision of Rowan and Elva, two children who live below-stairs, setting off on a quest to get to the holy grail before the knights do. And I knew they had to get the grail with kindness, not force.

Tales of Camelot are often considered part of the ‘Matter of Britain’. In many ways, Camelot has always been an idealised version of England and Englishness. I began writing this around the time of Brexit, and I wanted to explore what it is to be born under a ruler you don’t agree with. And, historically, England has of course done lots of very bad things. What if your nation are ‘the bad guys’? How can we embrace the best things about our history and culture, whilst resisting the narratives of those in power?

Elva is my favourite, I think. She just came to me fully formed, with all her righteous fury! Quests are all about overcoming obstacles, and young people who have disabilities or are in pain have a whole extra set of obstacles they have to overcome every day. She is a total heroine.

I love T.H. White’s Sword in the Stone. It actually has a dog-boy in it, which I think I must have half-remembered when I invented Rowan. I’m also a poet, so I was very inspired by poetry – Simon Armitage’s translation of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, Tennyson’s The Lady of Shalott, Browning’s Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came, as well as medieval riddle poems. I’ve been enjoying going into schools and getting children to write their own.

I am currently working on another children’s book about the voyage of the Argonauts. I am crazy about Greek myth, so am having a lot of fun with this. There’s a little girl who wants to be the Oracle of Delphi when she’s older who has joined the crew. Also a six-year-old siren with a really horrible singing voice!

I actually found it very hard to get The Untameables published. It was rejected by a lot of publishers. I think the children’s book world can be naturally quite conservative and the fact it has political parallels – that the round table is a sort of Bullingdon club – put them off. I also got asked if I could rewrite it so Rowan wants to be a knight! Little boys are supposed to be ‘knights-in-training’. So I think the fact this book is anti-knight worried editors. It was in a drawer for a couple of years before I saw that The Emma Press, who I knew as a wonderful poetry publisher, had a call-out for children’s chapter books and I submitted. I think as a small press they’re more open to radical texts, and I also knew they would make a very beautiful book. I am so happy they asked Reena Makwana to illustrate it – she is a total joy to work with.

I’m promoting my adult novel The Modern Fairies, and have a poetry book coming out next year. But yes, I have started another children’s book – my children are 8 and 11, just the right age, and there’s nothing like the pleasure of reading them a new chapter every night. It makes me feel very lucky.

Clare Pollard has published five collections of poetry, most recently Incarnation (Bloodaxe). Her play The Weather (Faber) was performed at The Royal Court Theatre. Her translations include Ovid’s Heroines, which she toured as a one-woman show. She has also written a non-fiction title, Fierce Bad Rabbits: The Tales Behind Children’s Picture Books (Fig Tree), her first children’s novel, The Untameables (The Emma Press), and two adult novels, Delphi and The Modern Fairies (Fig Tree).

With thanks to Sophie Davidson for this image.

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Guest Blog Post: Emily-Jane Clark on Writing Comedy, author of The Beasts of Knobbly Bottom series

“Can you write a joke about this building that looks like Donald Trump?” This was just one of random things I worked on when I was a TV comedy writer!

Before I was a children’s author, I wrote for television shows such as The Mash Report, Mock the Week and The Jonathan Ross Show, where I learnt a lot about joke-writing and how to use comedy to engage an audience, both of which were really useful when I started working on my funny series for children – The Beasts of Knobbly Bottom!

Writing jokes about feminism, politics, pop culture and parenting, may be very different to the humour in my The Beasts of Knobbly Bottom books but actually the process I use to come up with funny ideas is the same!

One of my favourite ways to come up with a comical situation is by using my ‘Wouldn’t it be funny if?’ technique. I will take an ordinary everyday occurrence or current issue and think of a way to make it silly, fun, or sometimes absurd! For instance, what if … toilets came alive and were really cross that people were weeing on them! Or, what if the King accidentally did a massive burp during his Christmas Day speech or even, as I put in my first book, wouldn’t it be funny if sheep turned into mean gangster vampires?

While it was a lot of fun creating comedy for grown ups, I find you can be even more bonkers when writing for children, which is one of the reasons I wanted to write a kid’s novel. That, and the fact I love a good bum joke, which tend to go down much better with under elevens…

Another form of humour I love to write is observational comedy – I did a lot of this for The Mash Report and the Daily Mash, so I really wanted to incorporate it into my books! As a mum of two young daughters, I realised that some of our discussions (OK, arguments!) are pretty funny. Children often try to find a loophole in their parents’ rules, think very literally or just be plain cheeky, and this can be hilarious. Therefore, I tried to include this in the relationship between my Knobbly Bottom mum character, Lucy, and her two daughters, Maggie, and Lily. It was important to me that their interactions were realistic and relatable and make parents laugh along with their children.

I love writing comedy for adults, but as a mother on a permanent quest to make her children laugh, and a massive kid at heart, creating Knobbly Bottom and all its weird and wonderful characters really has been a dream come true.

Emily-Jane Clark is a TV comedy writer, author and part-time drama teacher whose passion for stories and making children laugh inspired her to turn her hand to funny children’s fiction. She has written two books for children aged 8 – 11  THE BEASTS OF KNOBBLY BOTTOM: ATTACK OF THE VAMPIRE SHEEP and THE BEASTS OF KNOBBLY BOTTOM: RISE OF THE ZOMBIE PIGS (out on the 4th January).

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Interview: Author and WriteMentor creator Stuart White on new middle grade book ‘Astra FireStar and the Ripples of Time’

I’m a secondary school biology teacher who escapes from a busy job and family life by escaping into my small office and writing about fantastical worlds and characters! I’ve been writing seriously for about 13 years or so, and have now published 3 books under my own imprint, Penobi Press. I have two kids, E and X, who are 8 and 3, and quite honestly, way too much for me to handle!

Yes! It’s perfect for fans of Dr Who and I pitch it like this:

When new girl and time-fugitive Astra crashes a space-octopus into twelve-year-old Sam’s school, he swaps his unhappy home life for a timeless adventure to the stars. On the run from the time-police, they travel to far-off planets, in space and time, meeting new and unexpected friends, as well as many enemies, and growing a closer friendship than Sam could possibly ever have imagined. But when given a chance to resurrect his dead brother in exchange for Astra’s freedom, he must decide – change his past or forge a new future.  

But at its heart, it’s about loss and grief, and accepting the past and learning to move forward with your life.  

The key to me doing all this is simple: I am not very good at any of it! Seriously, I’m lucky to enjoy and be reasonably competent at a number of things, which I also love, so that Venn diagram intersects nicely across teaching/writing/community building, so I use many of the same skills across each, which make it easier to manage.

In all honesty, I might not still be writing if I hadn’t met lots of like-minded writers back in the early 2010s on Twitter, and so much of what I do is to help others see there’s hope and a wide community of writers there, all in it together, trying to achieve the same goal, and there’s a lot of strength and joy that comes from being a small part of that.

Honestly, I could write a book on this (maybe one day I will!) but the secret is keeping it simple. There’s SO MUCH information out there and so many ways to do it, that it’s best to try, initially, to drown out the noise and do the basics well.

Get a great editor and cover illustrator/designer, talk lots about it (remember you’re just as deserving, if not more so, of shouting about your book than someone who is traditionally published – after all, you’re doing about 3 or 4 times the work they are, so don’t be shy!), and focus on connecting with readers and the gatekeepers to those readers (i.e. school teachers, librarians, parents, grandparents, etc.) to get your books noticed by them. Everything else, and there’s a LOT of everything else, can be worked on later. 

I hope readers have fun and enjoy the adventure. Escapism is something that saved me from the harsh realities of my life when I was younger, and I hope this book can provide that for young people who are finding life hard or don’t have the perfect home situation. I don’t like to bang readers over the head with the theme, but there’s also an important lesson on letting go of your past and forging a new, exciting future for yourself. So many children from underprivileged backgrounds don’t think they can change their stars, and they have to follow the path of those around them and before them. I want Sam and Astra to show them they can do, and go, wherever they want.

We’ve just announced a partnership with Bonnier Books UK for our awards, and they’re keen to be involved in other things we do, too. They share a similar vision that we do, in that we want to provide opportunities for new voices to share their stories and give children a chance to read those great new voices. But we really do have a lot of pots in the fire, gently warming, and we’ll be continuing to put writers first, and organise things which will best help them to achieve their publishing goals, whatever they are. 

For me personally, I’ve got a Kickstarter coming next year for the next 3 Eva Knight books in the series, with Jen Jamieson, my brilliant cover illustrator, already agreeing to draw those. I’m also working on the sequel to The Nameless, my YA debut, and have an MG diabetic superhero story and YA serial killer thriller set on the moon that I think I will submit to agents in 2024. I’ve also outlined a Scottish Mythology MG which I want to write, but I might not get to that until 2025 (or maybe it will be a secret project that I can work on late at night when no-one is looking!). 

Great question! I always dreamed of being an explorer as a kid, but so much of Earth was already explored and discovered. So I’d maybe go back 200 years or so and set on a mission to one of the poles, or to climb one of the big mountains. Or go the other way, and fast forward into the future and be an astronaut who explores new worlds both within and outwith our Solar System. That would be fun! 

Stuart is an award-winning author and secondary school teacher. He has a Masters Degree in Creative Writing and founded, and now runs, WriteMentor. In 2020 and 2022 he was placed on the SCWBI Undiscovered Voices longlist and named as an Hononary Mention for his novels Ghosts of Mars and Astra FireStar and the Ripples of Time.
In 2023, he won the WriteBlend award for his middle grade debut, Ghosts of Mars. Stuart was included in The Bookseller’s 2021 list of Rising Stars in the publishing industry. He can be found at @StuartWhiteWM on most social media platforms.
Like his career, Steve’s writing is filled with tech and engineering, although his speculative thrillers tend to have higher stakes and fewer meetings. Before he found himself advising companies on digital transformation, Steve was a copywriter, a magazine editor, a communications director, a product designer and a webcaster, though not at the same time. Home is South London, where he lives with his wife and teenage daughters. They wish he’d stop saying, ‘What if…’

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Interview: Jennifer Burkinshaw on her new YA book ‘Happiness Seeker’.

Happiness Seeker tells the story of just one week’s sixth form field trip to the beautiful but lethal Morecambe Bay. On her very first afternoon, Allie meets a mysterious lad on the shore which changes the lives of everyone involved. One reviewer has described Happiness Seeker as a ‘thriller-mystery-love story’ which does sum it up its genres neatly; I’d add in ‘tragedy’, as the prologue tells you someone is lost in the vast, dark seas of Morecambe Bay.

Places seem to be what spark a story in me, both in my debut Igloo and Happiness Seeker. Visiting my parents in Grange-over-Sands on Morecambe Bay so often; learning about the history of the Bay and seeing people, every day, still walking out onto the treacherous sands despite all the warning signs. Before my parents even moved there, though, I once took a Drama group to a hostel near Grange to rehearse, which is pretty close to the set up in the novel; however, none of my group broke every rule in the book and we all went home safely.

At the heart of the story is what could be described as a political issue which particularly concerns me, so I recruited the advice of the charity Unseen during my writing process.

Map and plan of the novel’s setting by Douglas McCleery, architecture student

I first started to feel an irresistible pull to write about twenty years ago and knew I had to start to learn the craft, an endless journey, of course. Since I still feel seventeen in my head, writing for young adults was a natural move to me; I love the intensity of feeling you need to create in YA fiction; the need to be immediate and and pacy, as well as reflective; I love how so much of YA fiction deals with first and life-changing experiences for its characters. So, I did an MA in Creative Writing for Children at Manchester Met; after that I joined the Golden Egg Academy and was mentored by Imogen Cooper. I count myself as extremely fortunate that then Debbie McGowan, my genuinely brilliant editor and publisher at Beaten Track, offered to publish my debut, Igloo, and now Happiness Seeker.

As a former Drama teacher, I couldn’t resist creating a group who, having to script a piece for their A Level, choose to write it about Morecambe Bay and the many who have drowned there over the centuries. These past tragedies soon bleed into the present of the story. I also include some reference to Arthur Miller’s A View from the Bridge which Allie is reading that fateful week; Miller is my favourite playwright but, also, the action of his tragedy has some echoes in the story happening ‘now’ in Happiness Seeker.

Map and plan of the novel’s setting by Douglas McCleery, architecture student

What was really tricky was to work out what Mareno would reveal to Allie and when – especially since he has such compelling reasons not to tell her his whole truth. I spent ages thinking what he would least mind Allie knowing and what he’d try to keep from her at all costs. I hope he intrigues the reader; I tried so hard to see him through Allie’s eyes – what draws her to him even as she finds him such a ‘dark horse’.

Allie has a painful rivalry with Courtney, a girl in her drama group who has bullied her since Allie joined the school late in Year 9. To some extent, I am like Allie – quieter, on the fringe of groups and I do remember girls at my single-sex school who could be cutting like Courtney. Allie’s best friend is Finn but unfortunately, he falls for Courtney which causes Allie a lot of heartache. I haven’t experienced having a boy as a best friend but I relished creating their deep friendship which is at the heart of the story just as much as Allie’s new relationships in Grange.

I need to get back to ‘Going West’, a story told from the POV of a member of each of three generations in a family who move from Essex back to the mum’s childhood home in Wales. I’m toying whether to tell some of it in verse …

Jennifer’s debut book is Igloo, a winter coming-of-age story of first love set in the French Alps and Lancashire, where she grew up. Happiness Seeker is her second book.
Now, she’s a bit of a nomad – loves spending time by the sea as much as in the mountains and with her growing family.
You can visit her website here.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Interview: Author Jennifer Claessen chats about her new book ‘The November Witches’.

The November Witches picks up Clemmie’s story immediately after all of the things she did – and feels bad about! – in October. She’s expecting a magic-free month and all of the witches are mostly miserable about it but, of course, magical mayhem is about to ensue. It’s up to Clemmie to learn to speak up for herself and the young hags though, as it’s only together that they can fight back against the fires and knights plaguing them.

Thank you so much! And yes, I was already thinking about Bonfire Night and marshmallows and a strange knight knocking on the door even as I wrote The October Witches! November doesn’t always get the festive love that October and December get but it’s an amazing month for forest walks. I moved house just before writing this book and now live on the edge of an incredible, ever-changing forest which definitely inspired the story.

My family is costume-obsessed so we usually dress up at least three times for Halloween, always cute, never creepy! This year one of our fancy dress outfits was the ‘soot sprites’ from My Neighbour Totoro which was pure chaos and so fun. Toasting marshmallows outdoors is a must of course. Like the Merlyns, I have mixed feelings about fireworks but I love a bonfire. Oh, and Pie Night, like Aunt Connie creates, is essential too! Autumn clothes are the best too – the season begins for me when I put on a scarf and a big pair of boots, or for Clemmie and her coven, a binbag.

In The October Witches, Clemmie wrestles with coming into her power but now, in a magicless November, she’s struggling with using her voice. I write generally knowing the ending as I love a big, busy, bustly finale where the covens get together and finally sort out their problems! I think this is officially a spoiler but, just between us, there’s a dragon in The November Witches, too hot to even touch, and she was a surprise!

I love everything magical! I’m currently reading The Thief of Farrowfell Hall by Ravena Guron which has a really cool magical system as the magic is edible. I love the world which is believable and compelling and the magic itself, though it often sounds disgusting to eat!

I’m always super happy digging deep into some magical research! For the whole ‘A Month of Magic’ trilogy I did lots of reading about the old, wise, male Merlin (versus my young, self-conscious and female Merlyns!) and what happened to him. I’d never even heard of ‘Avalon’ where some Arthurian scholars believe the Once and Future King will still rise again from but became pretty fascinated by it. For The November Witches I went to the Fitzwilliam Museum in Cambridge to be completely surrounded by armour and imagine what it was like to be a knight – mostly pretty uncomfortable it turns out!

Well, now we’re this deep into autumn, we have to finish the trilogy! The December Witches comes out in 2024 and I’ve just had a sneak peek of early cover designs and it is looking gorgeously sparkly and snowy! Writing-wise, I’m working on new myth-inspired tales, this time set in Ancient Greece – and in a summer holiday!

Photo by Jack Barnes

Jennifer was born in Reading and grew up a book worm. She studied literature and theatre at the University of Sheffield, the Chinese University of Hong Kong, Canterbury Christchurch University and Central School of Speech and Drama. A teacher and theatre-maker, Jennifer loves stories, especially for children, whether on stage or page. Jennifer currently works in the West End, taking children to the theatre and lives in the East End with her partner, a Dutch toymaker, and their baby daughter. She loves reading, travel and ice cream. You can find her on her yellow bike or in a red velvet seat in the stalls, applauding.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

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Interview: Children’s Author Emma Read on ‘The Housetrap’

Of course! The Housetrap is a spooky, Scooby Doo-esque adventure where four almost-friends find themselves trapped in a strange house in the woods. The house is set for an escape room style party but for some reason it doesn’t want to let the kids go … it has other plans for them. The team have to unravel multiple mysteries and at the same time attempt to solve the puzzles and riddles left by the architect of the house, in a desperate effort to escape. The only thing they have in their favour is that they are alone in there …  

Or are they? 

For readers 9+ who like mystery, puzzles, adventure, and the odd jump scare. 

In addition to the creepy words (by me) the illustrations on the cover and interior are by Coralie Muce.

The editing process on The Housetrap was something of a metaphor for the book, in that it was a twisty, turny puzzle that needed unlocking, disassembling, and slotting back into place the right way round! I couldn’t have done any of it without my brilliant agent, Lauren Gardner, and my editor at Chicken House, Kesia Lupo who both helped me make it make sense.  

I’m not a natural plotter, although I usually formulate a rough plan in advance (plot points, pinch points etc); when it comes to writing I love the discovery approach – it’s a bit like wandering through a maze—or a house—that keeps changing and revealing new secrets. No spoilers, but there is one item in the book that the kids need to find, and I only worked out where it was by writing all the way to the end! It’s a fun method that works for me, but it does mean edits are usually hard work!  

Places I’ve been, and seen, always find their way into my books, and The Housetrap is no exception. The idea for the house itself, and the entire story really, came from a beautiful but declining hotel in Rome. Haphazardly built, it had several mezzanine levels, rooms that were unexpectedly connected, and stairs that didn’t seem to go where you thought they should.

As I wrote, I augmented it with fictional houses and hotels (the Overlook won’t be a surprise, I’m sure!) But it was another, real-life, hotel which lent the finishing touches, including all the taxidermy animals and mounted deer heads. This was another, past-its-best building, hidden in the New Forest in Hampshire (a forest created for a king, like Badwell Woods in the novel.) 

The Housetrap is set in Suffolk, where I grew up, which is home to Thetford forest – a magnificently huge place, which, when I was a child, I truly believed a person could get lost in forever. 

Character-wise, I think the only one who is drawn from life is Deliah. There is a lot of me in her – like her I was embarrassed of being smart; I thought it made other people uncomfortable so I masked it … being clever wasn’t cool where I went to school! In Deliah I wanted to create a character who could work through those feelings and grow to be proud of her intelligence. 

In Milton the Mighty/Megastar, I was keen to show the characters as realistically as possible, their spidery movement, physiology and, as much as possible within the bounds of the story, their behaviour. In The Housetrap, there’s not a lot of science directly on the page, but I still examine all my scenes to make sure they are logical, within the rules of whatever supernatural power is in play.

More generally, I find a wealth of story inspiration in science, from pure sci-fi ideas, to cli-fi, to the natural world and way beyond: the first story I ever had published was inspired by a conversation about ghosts on The Infinite Monkey Cage (a science comedy podcast with Professor Brian Cox) which makes it feel like I’ve come full circle! 

It might seem anathema to some to consider writing a competitive sport, but as an aspiring writer, I entered every comp going! My first win was a Twitter micro fiction competition (back in the days of 140 characters!) and I kept going until I hit the amazing heights of the BCNA shortlist. Writing competitions aren’t for everyone – the odds are not ever in your favour and the likelihood is you will fail. And if you do list, or even win, there are no guarantees of success.

But … if you can stomach with that, competitions provide interesting benefits (besides the chance to walk away with a prize). They are great motivators, providing hard deadlines of the sort you might get from a publisher; they force you to scrutinise your work, helping you become a better editor; and they acclimatise you to having professionals read your work and, if you’re lucky, critique it.  

If you’re going to enter competitions, my advice is to try and enter with friends; turn it into a team sport, where successes can be vicarious, and failure can be shared and contextualised. Also, be clear on why you’re entering and manage your expectations. What do you hope to accomplish? Achieving a listing, or a notable mention is a fantastic addition to your query letter, and getting used to rejection will set you in good stead for any writing journey. 

When it comes to The Housetrap, my main desire is for readers to have fun. I wanted to write a thrilling adventure, something that makes you gasp and squeal, with delight and just a little bit of terror – like riding your bike super fast downhill. But there are some messages to take away too – I’ve already mentioned Deliah’s smarts, but also I want readers (perhaps especially girls) to see that maths has value. I volunteer at my local primary school, helping out with maths and I see too many girls in KS2 with self-imposed barriers to the subject. I hope the book speaks to them, just a little. 

More broadly, appropriately scary books can be beneficial to children’s emotional development. There are a lot of studies across this subject but in a nutshell, readers can experience fear, almost practice it, in a safe environment and learn to recognise their own personal tolerance for risk. One of my favourite pieces of feedback for the book has been from readers wondering what they would do in the same situation. How would they respond, how would they escape? Allowing readers a ‘run-through’ like this, of their feelings, allows them to be challenged and grow emotionally, in a safe environment. 

As much as I’d love to scare the living daylights out of Deliah and the gang again, in all likelihood it’s probably not going to happen. If there were to be a sequel, I do have a seed of an idea as to what that might look like, so never say never – it might turn up as a short story or a freebie on my Substack!  

Emma Read is the author of The Housetrap, and the Milton series (Chicken House), including Milton the Mighty, one of The Times Best Children’s Books of 2019 and shortlisted for the Bath Children’s Novel Award.
She loves all things spooky (and spidery!) and can often be found walking through her local graveyard … but only in daylight. Like Mark Gatiss, she doesn’t believe in ghosts, but is scared of them. Connect with Emma at @emmydee73 (Twitter), @ediereadie (Instagram), subscribe at emmaread.substack.com/ for exclusive content, and get in touch at emmareadauthor.com   
Like his career, Steve’s writing is filled with tech and engineering, although his speculative thrillers tend to have higher stakes and fewer meetings. Before he found himself advising companies on digital transformation, Steve was a copywriter, a magazine editor, a communications director, a product designer and a webcaster, though not at the same time. Home is South London, where he lives with his wife and teenage daughters. They wish he’d stop saying, ‘What if…’

Stay tuned for Steve’s review of The Housetrap in our autumn/winter issue, coming soon!

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

All our issues are completely free and run by volunteers, however if you would like to support PaperBound and the work we do, you can help us out by buying us a virtual book. We appreciate any support you can give us!

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Interview: Millie Florence on being a Teenage Published Author, Navigating Negativity, and Middle Grade Book Deals

PaperBound Magazine are thrilled to feature a blog Q&A with author Millie Florence.

This interview has been composed and written by freelance writer Cailey Tin.

Q&A with Millie Florence

You published your debut book, Honey Butter, at age thirteen. What was the process of writing and publishing it like for you? Were there any resources or help you got at the start?

I may not have finished Honey Butter without NaNoWriMo. NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month, which is every November. It’s the challenge to write the entire first draft of a novel in thirty days. Their official website provides you with tools to track your word count goal, advice, and inspirational pep talks to keep you motivated. The program was definitely what pushed me to write the first draft of Honey Butter. 
I’ve been obsessed with writing and storytelling for as long as I can remember, but always struggled to finish anything longer than a short story. My goal in writing Honey Butter was to write something a step up from a short story. Something simple and short and sweet, but something I could write with excellence. Something I could be proud of. Although all my projects before this had been epic fantasy and sci-fi novels, for this I purposefully kept myself to a limit of 30k words and a contemporary story set in an ordinary suburban neighborhood. 
I have a video on my YouTube channel about the process of writing Honey Butter, which I highly recommend. I explain everything more eloquently and in depth there, with some advice for young writers who are experiencing the same struggles I did! 
So far, yes, I have read my book reviews, but that’s mostly because there aren’t very many of them. Due to having a smaller number of reviews, there also aren’t many hateful ones. I anticipate receiving a lot more reviews once my traditionally published books are released, because those companies have a built-in audience that I don’t, and it has been on my mind lately, how I should approach reviews once I start getting large numbers of them. 
Abbie Emmons, an author and YouTuber I follow, mentioned getting in a very bad mental place with reviews when her first novel came out. She read every single review for a while, and whether she had a good day or a bad day depended on the reviews she got. Obviously, that’s not healthy. 
I think it’s a balance. You need to be able to take feedback and hear what your readers are saying, but you can’t let it consume your life. It comes down to having confidence in your story. You have to be able to see through both flattery and hate to recognize your story for what is truly is. 
It’s been a really interesting experience, and I love both! I love the control of self-publishing and the fact that I get to be intimately a part of how the book is produced. Still, traditional publishing has a wonderful collaborative nature to it, and it’s amazing to work with such talented and hard-working individuals. The process and experience with traditional publishing can also really change depending on what company you work with. 
In the future, I’ll choose a route depending on what I think each book needs. 
My favorite part of writing is when the characters come to life. If you develop characters well, they’ll sort of start talking and acting on their own, or, to put it in less whimsical terms, you know exactly what they would do or say in any situation. Thus, all you have to do is create the right situations, put your characters in them, sit back, and type as fast as you can. It’s like building a marble run and then experiencing the satisfaction of watching your marble zoom through it exactly as you intended. Those are my favorite scenes to write, with characters bouncing off each other and their environment until they land exactly where they need to be to further the plot. 
Of course, sometimes it’s not that easy. Sometimes you’ve miscalculated the placement of a few pieces in your marble run, and when you put the marble in it falls out off the track, or goes in a different direction entirely. That’s when adjustments need to be made.
I always write my first draft as quickly as possible, which takes one to three months, depending on the length of the draft. I have to strike while the iron is hot, so to speak, and take advantage of that initial burst of inspiration. The drafts after that vary, they can less or more time than the first draft, it all depends on what changes I decide to make. I alternate between receiving feedback from beta readers and author friends, and implementing the changes until I feel that the story is the best it can possibly be! It usually takes me four or five drafts to get there. 
When I’m writing a first draft I spend anywhere from one to five hours a day writing. That’s the most intensive part of the process. Once I get to later drafts progress it a bit more difficult to measure. I’ll often go days or weeks without writing in drafts two and three, but I never stop brainstorming and thinking through the best way to improve the storyline. That way, when I do sit down to write, I don’t spend too much time staring at my blinking cursor. Half the battle is sorting out what I’m going to write. After that, it comes pretty easily to me. 
I always knew I wanted to publish my books someday, so I would say it felt a lot more exciting than intimidating. There was definitely a lot to learn, but I loved every minute of the learning process. I started out by researching publishing in-depth and eventually settled on using Ingramspark for my self-publishing distributor. Later, when I wanted to explore traditional publishing, I did a lot of research on how to query and the different pieces that went into that avenue. 
Getting distracted. Our modern world is full of distractions, and writing, by nature, requires you to be bored enough to come up with your own imaginative entertainment. When social media is always at my fingertips, that can be very difficult. Those distractions have always been a struggle for me, but I learn and grow every day! 
I follow my inspiration, and so far all the story ideas I’ve come up with have been middle-grade! If I get an idea in the future that better lends itself to YA, then yes, I’ll write a YA book, but otherwise, I don’t have any plans to. I do have plans to write more picture books in the future! Picture books are a very special medium to me–they’re like an art gallery and a short story rolled into one. I can’t draw, but I love working with people who can, and I love the challenge that comes with telling a story in such a short format. 
A stage actor. 
I’ve been acting in community theater since I was very young, and I absolutely love it. The collaboration with the cast and crew and the opportunity to bring a character to life is a very special experience. I love working with fellow creative people, and I love putting on a show. There’s something beautiful about hearing your audience’s reaction in real-time, and for a few hours, in one room, a group of strangers are all fully immersed in a story together.
Yes! I’m a big fan of middle-grade, and I always will be. Two books that were influential to me at a young age were Anne of Green Gables by L. M. Montgomery and A Little Princess by Frances Hodgson Burnett. I listened to those two audiobooks over and over and over again when I was little, and they definitely instilled in me a sense of wonder for everyday life, and the importance of imagination and hope. 
One of my favorite quotes about storytelling is “The two most engaging powers of an author are to make new things familiar, and familiar things new.” Anne of Green Gables and A Little Princess are in the category of making familiar things new. 
In the category of making new things familiar, I also grew up reading Harry Potter, The Lord of the Rings, and The Chronicles of Narnia
My favorite book of all time is The Mysterious Benedict Society by Trenton Lee Stewart. It checks all the boxes of everything I love in a middle-grade novel and executes them to near perfection. Mystery and adventure, lively characters, subtly quirky narration, impossible odds, and yet everlasting hope. It’s an adventure that is fun and fantastic, while simultaneously holding great depth and wisdom that leaves a lingering warmth in your chest when you finish. It’s the sort of book I want to write!
Quite honestly, I would say “Don’t worry so much.” 
I’m very passionate and motivated when it comes to my writing, but there is a dark side to that when doubts start to creep in. What if I don’t make it? What if my writing isn’t good? What if it is good but it doesn’t matter because it gets lost on the internet and no one ever reads it? What if I do everything right, but I just wasn’t lucky enough? What if I’m still here in fifteen years? 
But worrying about those questions doesn’t answer them. Doubting if a dream will come true doesn’t make it any more likely to do so. Worrying doesn’t make a difference in the outcome, but it does make a difference in our mood, and not in a good way. What does make a difference in the outcome is excitement and creativity and passion for the stories we write, and you’ll live a happier life along the way. 

Millie Florence

Millie Florence is an adventurous homeschooler who published her first book, ‘Honey Butter’, at age 13, and another middle grade book at age 15. Currently, she has two books on the way. She loves sushi, zip lines, and just about all things yellow. 

Connect with Millie on Instagram: @millieflorenceauthor.

Cailey Tin

Cailey Tin is an interview editor of Paper Crane Journal. She is an Asia-based staff writer and podcast co-host at The Incandescent Review, a columnist in Incognito Press and Spiritus Mundi Review, and her work has been published in Fairfield Scribes, Alien Magazine, Cathartic Lit, and more.
Her work is forthcoming in the Eunoia Review and Dragon Bone Publishing. Visit her Instagram @itscaileynotkylie.

PaperBound Magazine is an online magazine for the young, and the young at heart. We are dedicated to showcasing authors and illustrators for children’s and young adult fiction and we strive to deliver inspiring content, uplifting stories, and top tips for young and aspiring writers yet to burst on to the literary scene.

All our issues are completely free and run by volunteers, however if you would like to support PaperBound and the work we do, you can help us out by buying us a virtual book. We appreciate any support you can give us!

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Blog Tour: Bigfoot Island by Roderick O’Grady

PaperBound Magazine are thrilled to be part of the Blog Tour for Bigfoot Island.

We were lucky enough to interview Rod all about the inspiration behind his books!

Q&A with Roderick O’Grady

Can you tell us a little bit about your new book Bigfoot Island (and Bigfoot Mountain for those who haven’t read it yet – no spoilers!) and the inspiration behind it?

Let’s start with what inspired me to write BFM. I had never written a book before and the only subject at the time that really intrigued me was that of Bigfoots also known as Sasquatches, also known as Sabe (Saa-bay). In fact, every Native American tribe has a word in their language for the big hairy forest people that, according to them, have always lived on the American continent. I had happily fallen down the rabbit-hole of ‘Bigfoot Research’. In Bigfoot Mountain we meet the four humans living in the Pacific North West in cabins near the sea at the foot of a mountain – Minnie, her step dad Dan, their neighbour Connie and her young son Billy.
We also meet eleven Bigfoots who are looking for a new forest home as wild fires forced them to leave their caves in the mountains to the east. Minnie and the young Bigfoot Kaayii (who is nearly seven foot tall) don’t become friends, but they do help each other. In Bigfoot Island, a family comes to stay in one of the cabins who go hunting on the mountain. Minnie is worried that their paths will cross with Kaayii. The young Bigfoot has problems of his own when an angry rogue Bigfoot arrives on the mountain and starts wandering close to the humans. Kaayii needs help and, again, Minnie is able to provide it.

What made you decide to write about Sasquatches?

The evidence for their actual existence has been increasing in recent years. I’ve read the DNA report which says they are an unknown relic hominid, not yet recognised by science. If they do indeed exist then I think the way I describe their way of life might be quite accurate. They live in family groups, are self-appointed stewards of the forest, and can communicate telepathically.

Did you have to do a lot of research to write your books? If so, what was the most interesting thing you discovered?

I did a ton of research and am still learning. I wanted to set the story in a temperate rainforest where animals thrive as it has high rainfall and therefore plenty to eat. So, I researched the area of Western Canada in British Colombia so that the descriptions of the flora and fauna are accurate. I’ve never been there, though I hope to visit one day. The most interesting thing I discovered is that many eye witness accounts of seeing Bigfoots in the woods describe how they seem to be able to make themselves go invisible, possibly by raising their vibration. And the footprints they leave in mud and snow can suddenly stop, like they just disappeared in to another dimension!

What do you hope readers will take from these books?

I believe that the more children understand about nature, the more they will want to protect it. I hope I have described the forest, the sea shore, the islands vividly enough that they will want to go out in to nature and explore our wonderful natural world.

What do you enjoy most about being an author?

I really enjoy meeting children in schools, and inspiring them to think about maybe writing a story one day.

If you could give one writing tip to an aspiring author, what would it be?

Just start writing. Your first idea might not be the one that will end up being a great story but the process of writing will pull from your subconscious mind incredible ideas, charming characters, fun dialogue and extraordinary places ­- if you just let it.

Roderick O’Grady is an actor who has worked in London and New York. His stage play, ‘A Foolish Fancy – How not to Get Ahead in the Theatre’ was a Time Out critic’s choice on the London Fringe. He has voiced the audiobook for Bigfoot Mountain, his first children’s book.

Bigfoot Island

When Minnie spots a white boat bringing strangers to the cove below her cabin, she fears the hard-won peace of her tiny community at the foot of Bigfoot Mountain will be shattered.
Kaayii too has to deal with an intruder on the mountain and, injured, needs to reach his family across the water. The two inhabit separate worlds but must find a way to work together to avoid disaster and protect the people and places they hold dear.

Bigfoot Mountain and Bigfoot Island are out now and published by Firefly Press

We have loved being a part of the Bigfoot Island Blog Tour!
Don’t forget to check out the other great blogs this week, for lots more from the world of Bigfoot Mountain!